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Rated: E · Prose · Thriller/Suspense · #2355573

A widow folding her husband’s coat finds something hidden where no one thought to look.

She folded his coat one last time, smoothing the fabric like a prayer.

The wool resisted slightly beneath her palm. It had always been too heavy for California winters,
but he said he liked the weight of it.

She laid it flat across the bed. Adjusted the collar. Pressed the sleeves inward with careful hands.

The house was quiet in the way it had been for weeks now. Not dramatic. Just different. Air moved
through it differently. Doors didn’t open as often.

She paused at the inside pocket.

He kept everything in the same place. Keys in the left. Wallet in the right. Receipts he meant to
throw away, but never did.

The pocket was empty.

They had handed it back to her, folded already.

That detail bothered her more than it should have.

She slipped her fingers along the lining, feeling for the familiar bump of keys or the edge of leather.
Instead, her fingertip caught on something uneven.

A seam.
Not torn. Opened.

She held the coat closer to the light. The stitching along the hem had been unpicked and sewn back again. Careful. Neat.
Almost invisible.

He didn’t sew.

She sat down slowly on the edge of the bed.

They had told her it was simple. A fall. A misstep near the overlook.
It happens.

He hated heights.

The coat rested in her lap now, folded smaller than before.

She smoothed it again, the way you do when you’re not ready to let something go.

Her thumb slipped inside the loosened seam.

Something thin pressed against her skin. Paper.

Not thick like a receipt. Thinner. Something intentional.

Her breath changed.

She didn’t pull it out right away.

Instead, she laid the coat back on the bed.

Downstairs, someone laughed too loudly. A glass touched another. Her name floated up the
stairwell, followed by a pause when she didn’t answer.

She stood.

Walked to the bedroom door.

Closed it gently, shutting out the noise from the guests gathered below for his celebration of life.

The house settled into quiet.

She returned to the coat.

Her fingers slipped into the loosened seam.

She drew it out slowly.

And understood.

Written in 15 minutes to a Gotham Writing Prompt- She folded the coat like she was saying a prayer.
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