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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery!

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Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this biography! A very sweet and nice introduction about yourself. I believe that it is always nicd to hear of other writers, and how they got started in the "writing game." I enjoyed the part of your wife because I myself am a wife and know of the intricacies of being wife and writer. Nice work on this! *Smile*

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Review of Gate Keepers  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "If you wish to know of the truth,
touch the gate with one hand.
Be a student, and ask a question.
Be a master, and state a truth.
Remember, the truth speaks quickly."

Emotion: Nice emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work in this area! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was beautiful, and I enjoyed the ending especially. I like the reference to the gate, and touching it with your hand. I think in life, we are all students. While some may be teachers, they are still students in the circle of life. Nice work on this overall! *Smile*

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Who knows despair, but also knows hope? Hope that her daughter will see not through her mother’s eyes, but through her own. She begs her daughter to keep that hope. To survive in a world where a mother’s eyes are all that a daughter has."

Emotion: Nice emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: There were a couple grammatical and punctuation errors. I have fixed them in the imagery category. Otherwise, nice work! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This was a beautiful piece! I really enjoyed the use of religion and the "veil" that hangs in front of this woman's face. Nice work on the imagery and the emotion. Great job overall! *Smile*

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Review of Buster  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "On June 2, 1973, the 5 year old boy stood in front of the closed casket. "He did" not "understand" why he couldn’t see his grandfather anymore, but "missed" him already, as he would miss him the rest of his days."

Emotion: Nice emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: There were a couple grammatical and punctuation errors. I have fixed them in the imagery category. Otherwise, nice work! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This was a horribly sad story, and the ending was sad as well. The moral this story presented was a good one. Depression can be a difficult thing to live with, and for some, they cannot. Nice work with this story overall! *Smile*

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Review of I am Selfish  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "I'm selfish when I lean to kiss you; "it's" your kiss I really need.
"I love you," I say, but what I'm really saying is please, love me more.
Even when you die, I cry and get angry, all because I am selfish - I need you."

Emotion: Nice emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: There were a couple punctuation errors. I have fixed them in the imagery category. Otherwise, nice work! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem made me truly ponder love. I think we all are selfish when it comes to love. We all need for our significant other to be all right, because in the end, we love them and need them. Nice work overall! *Smile*

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Review of Love  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Eve...

"She" calls to me;
I am her daughter."


Emotion: Nice emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: There were a couple punctuation errors. I have fixed them in the imagery category. Otherwise, nice work! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was beautiful, and I really enjoyed the sentiment. I also believe that love should touch everyone at least once in their life. Nice work on this poem overall! *Smile*

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: " I looked back to my dad.

"Dad," I shook my head from side to side trying to halt my tears in their tracks.

I looked down at him and whispered, "I will miss you forever."

Emotion: Beautiful emotion!

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work in this area! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This story was so sad. I was crying as I read this. I am so very sorry for your loss, and I wish you and your family the very best. I give my deepest condolences for the loss of your father, and if you ever need anything, I am here. This story was absolutely beautiful, and the emotion was just so overwhelming. I am giving you a perfect 5 for the emotion and the imagery. Nice work again! *Bigsmile*

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Through the blinds,
water breaks from the sky.
Yellow birds bathe in small puddles;
"raindrops" bounce "on" the branches of Weeping Willows.
Flowers lift their leaves in dire need;
yet I remain dry."

Emotion: Nice emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: There were a couple grammatical and punctuation errors. I have fixed them in the imagery category. Otherwise, nice work! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! The imagery was splendid in this poem, and I really enjoyed the sentiment as well. Panic attacks and mental health disorders or issues can prevent a lot of new experiences from entering into our lives. I give my deepest condolences for your pain, and wish you the best in all you do. Nice work on this poem overall! *Smile*

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Review of The Quill  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "And as the quill with painted word lends face to darken heart,
uncompromising duty beckons to stand apart.
Call forth the horror that abides with honesty and weight,
in steadfast poise; bestow fury, which dwells at terror’s gate."

Emotion: Amazing emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: There were a couple punctuation errors. I have fixed them in the imagery category. Otherwise, nice work! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was simply amazing! The rhyming was consistent, and it was so well-written! The imagery and emotion were beautiful, and the sentiment of this poem was divine. I am giving this piece a perfect 5 for the creativity, imagery, and the way you stuck to the prompt. Simply amazing! Great work overall! *Smile*

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Review of Phantoms  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Ghostly shadow
floats,
like wispy swirling tendrils
of lazy gray smoke,
hidden behind
the mirror of my memory;
lingering."

Emotion: Beautiful emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: There were a couple punctuation errors. I have fixed one of them in the imagery category. Otherwise, nice work! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This was an absolutely beautiful poem! I would have to say the last stanza was my favorite! Amazing job on this entry! The emotion and imagery were so well-written, this poem was very well thought out. Nice work on this piece overall! *Smile*

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Review of Final Call  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Our soldier stands tall, for now it's time he
must answer Destiny's final call.
And as the price for freedom, "it's" once again
given "as" another soldier enters the open
gates of Heaven."

Emotion: Beautiful emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: There were a couple grammatical and punctuation errors. I have fixed them in the imagery category. Otherwise, nice work! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This was a most loevely poem! By the end of this poem, I felt heartbroken. Amazing emotion and imagery portrayed in this piece! I really enjoyed this poem overall, and I cannot wait to see your entry into the Gothic Contest! Thank you for your interest! *Bigsmile*

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Review of Midnight Angel  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Most nights it doesn't come here,
but maybe one night when it does;
I will go."

Emotion: Nice emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: There was no punctuation used. I have fixed the imagery category for you. Otherwise, nice work! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This was a very interesting poem. I enjoyed the description and imagery that you presented. One thing I did notice, however, was a feel of redunancy for "It will." You may wish to change some of these into, "the creature" or "the being." These are just suggestions. Overall, nice work on this poem! *Smile*

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Review of One Last Time  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Stormy and raining, raindrops "trickled" down my hair as I walked alone "at" midnight. The moon was hidden behind the clouds, unable to shine "and grace" my path. I checked my watch and realized it was already very late."

Emotion: Nice emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: There were a couple grammatical and punctuation errors. I have fixed them in the imagery category. Otherwise, nice work! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This was a very interesting story! I have fixed up the imagery category for you. There were some places where a word was needed or not needed in that sentence.

This story was very sad at the end. It is always hard losing someone we love. If this is based on a true experience, I give my deepest condolences. Nice work on this story overall! *Bigsmile*

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Review of Life  
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Death is inevitable, but it isn't an excuse to escape. Running away won't do any good "either." Death is unexpected, so we should treasure everyday like there's no tomorrow."

Emotion: Nice emotion! *Bigsmile*

Grammar and Spelling: There were a couple grammatical and punctuation errors. I have fixed them in the imagery category. Otherwise, nice work! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! You presented a nice message in this musing. Life is too short, plain and simple. We all need to treasure the time we have, and look towards the future. Nice work on this message, and keep up the great work! Good job on this piece overall! *Bigsmile*

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Review of Wiccan Queen  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "With blackened lips and skin so white,
she lifts her head to scream,
as the bones of all the dead bow low
to Gothic Princess--Wiccan Queen."

Emotion: Beautiful emotion! *Bigsmile*

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work in this area! *Bigsmile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! Now this poem is what I was thinking of for this contest! This is exactly what the contest is all about! I would be absolutely honored if you would allow me to use this poem as an introduction for the contest! I am giving this poem a perfect 5 for absolutely everything about it! Amazing work on this piece! *Bigsmile*

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Review of Abnormalities  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "I felt his hollow stare burrow into my flesh,
his eyes gaping like dark windows into my past
and stealing the very warmth from my blood."

Emotion: Beautiful emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work in this area! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This was a simply amazing poem! I loved the imagery and the word usage was spectacular! The ending was my favorite part, specifically the last two lines: "Then as he approached . . . I saw
that it was me." Simply Amazing! Beautiful work on this poem! I am giving this a perfect 5 for the imagery, emotion, and the content! Great work on this piece! *Bigsmile*



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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Whispers brush love on her cheek,
breeze sings prayers to the heart.
Twin souls find this place to meet,
pledge is made; never again to part."

Emotion: Nice emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: There were a couple punctuation errors. I have fixed them in the imagery category. Otherwise, nice work! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was so lovely, and I was moved by the last stanza. Your word usage is amazing, and the imagery speaks volumes! Nice work on this poem overall! *Smile*

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Fallen; she is placid,
below death’s precipitous walls.
Disparage, or not, her obstinate killer;
exiguous and pretentious, in a hail of bullets he falls."

Emotion: Beautiful emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: There were a couple punctuation errors. I have fixed them in the imagery category. Otherwise, nice work! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! Nice work with the vocabulary, and the word usage was divine! I loved the content and the poem is so lovely! This poem was simply beautiful! Nice work on this piece overall! *Smile*

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "And after hearing this, he turned his gaze
To mountains beyond, where the sun had sunk.
‘Twas there the dragon, born of fiery blaze,
was guarding castles full of golden junk."

Emotion: Nice emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work in this area! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! The rhyming was consistent, and the imagery was divine. I really liked the content of this poem, and have often wondered what dragons were made of. This poem was well-written, and I thought this was well-thought out. Nice work on this overall! *Smile*

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Review of Africa! Africa!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "When the night pounces slickly,
and its teeth are dim as death.
And its paws are plush and prickly,
and the air is humid breath."

Emotion: Beautiful emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: There were a couple punctuation errors. I have fixed them in the imagery category. Otherwise, nice work! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was so lovely, and the emotion was so beautiful throughout this entire piece! I loved the imagery and the sentiment was divine! I am giving this a perfect 5 for the imagery and the content. I have always wanted to visit Africa, and this poem has inspired me to do so. Great job overall! *Smile*

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Sure, one can hope to see dinosaurs walking, and true love besides, but sadly, the sky is pig clear... except in stories.

Emotion: Nice emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: There were a couple punctuation errors scattered throughout. I have fixed one of them in the imagery category. Otherwise, nice work! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this short story! This short story spoke so much truth in such a few amount of words. I would have to agree with you. Science does seem to have a way of dissolving our fantasies of what could be. Nice work on this piece! I am giving you a perfect 5 for the creativity and imagery of this story! Overall, nice work! *Bigsmile*

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "How broad the span beyond the light,
eternal berth to sad refrain.
All beauty shed from dreary sight,
in burning irons torment and pain."

Emotion: Amazing emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: I have added in some punctuation, and fixed the imagery category. Otherwise, nice work! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This was such a lovely and amazing poem! I was so overwhelmed with emotion while reading this! Great job! I am giving this a perfect 5 for the unbelievable imagery and sentiment. Nice work on this overall! *Smile*

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "There is no shelter from the suction of the maelstrom. I’ll have to dispense with my note-taking for the time being in order to hold my grip on this fence post."

Emotion: Beautiful emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work in this area! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This story was so creative! I really enjoyed the word usage and the content. Towards the end, I found myself wondering exactly how he died. It speaks of Professor Brewer disappearing, but it does not tell of how he disappears. I guess that is left up to the reader's imagination. *Smile* Nice work on this story overall!

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Morning comes, and brings with it the "hangover" and the realization that life trudges on, even when you feel you’ve been left behind…"

Emotion: Amazing emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling: There were a couple grammatical and punctuation errors. I have fixed them in the imagery category. Otherwise, nice work! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This story was absolutely amazing! I loved it! I must admit, however, that it was one of the saddest and most depressing stories I have read in a while. I have to give this story a perfect 5 for the amazing imagery and content altogether! Nice work on this story overall! *Smile*

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: ""I remember you," she wispered, "I remember you, the fear of my past."
She swung up and down, and round and round.
"I was too young," she thought aloud, "you hurt me when I was too young."

Emotion: Beautiful emotion! *Smile*

Grammar and Spelling:There were a couple punctuation errors. I have fixed them in the imagery category. Otherwise, nice work! *Smile*

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was simply lovely, and yet so sad. The ending was the most depressing part of the poem. The only real glaring issues I could find were punctuation. One sentence which did not make much sense to me was this: "The string was torn like crinkled notes of money." I liked the imagery, but I do not understand the "notes of money." Maybe a different word instead of "notes" would clarify this line. Otherwise, nice work overall! *Smile*


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