wow this is awesome. beautifully written . your words make me want to lite a candle and watch it all night long. Thanks for the read and keep on writing
wow this is an awesome poem. I could related to the feelings in this poem. I think at one time or another we all have felt warped and twisted. I love those words. There great. Thanks for the read and keep on writing!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you for making people aware of this. My doctor told me three years ago that I have fibro. They told me that I would have to quit my job so they could put me on pain medcine. I have not quit my job as of yet and living everyday in pain is a pain. I am one of those people that don't quit on anything. I will try to write somethiimg for this contest. Once again Thank you
wow this is great. my son is only four and he hates bath time. I`m going to print this off if it`s okay with you. I think that he`ll like Bertie`s bathtime. This is a really good story. It comes together perfectly. Thanks for the read and keep writing.
Thanks Jeanette
Let me start with saying hello. My name is Jeanette and I am a newbie to this site.I like what you wrote here because it is honest and from the heart. Yes some reviews could make a person think twice about writing. As has beeen the case for me. I picked myself up dusted of the hurt. Thank you for letting me see that this does happen to everyone. Keep writing as I am sure you will.
Thanks Jeanette
This is an awesome way for a son to pay tribute to his mother. I could feel the love coming throught your words. It is as if they where jumping of the page at me. I would not change a thing . It's perfect just the way you have written it. Keep writing as i look forward to reading more.
Thanks Jeanette
Oh my god this peom has truely made me cry. It touched my heart with such passion. Your mother would be honor that you wrote of her feelings for you. A mothers love
is one that will be with you till the end on time. When you need her she is always there. In her letters to you and in your poems. Thank-you for the honor of reading your peom
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