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Review of Once  
Review by 1leila123
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was an excellent poem to my way of thinking! I loved it in that it made me think deeply and I liked the flow of it also. It reminds me of a love that could have been but wasn't. I wouldn't change a thing and so hope you continue in writing for many years to come.

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Review of No Hero  
Review by 1leila123
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This poem just amazed me in how true guilt can be and how horrible it is, to have to bear that guilt. Can you imagine how this person felt? That's what makes a good poem is that the writtian words pull the reader into the poem itself. Keep up the good work!

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Review of Jimmy  
Review by 1leila123
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I have read a few of your poems so far and have to say I like them. Your style of having shorter poems is great and they are usually thought provoking. Makes one think hard as their reading them! Keep up the style!
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Review of My Pet Dragon  
Review by 1leila123
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This reminded me more of a story than a poem but either way it is so "cute" I liked it and the ending especially! I did notice that some verses had 5 lines, some had 6 and others 7 so upon reading it, it kind of drug on. I wonder about shortening up some of the verses? This is a good enough poem to try different things with but it has great potential! Keep up the writing!
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Review of One More Time  
Review by 1leila123
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The more times I read this very simple poem the more I liked it! Sometimes the less we write in a poem the better it is. Short and to the point. Keep up the good writing. By the way Welcome to our site!
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Review of Half a Red Heart.  
Review by 1leila123
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem was really very good and I liked the basic flow of it. Very descriptive and it pulled me right in. The only thing that ruined the flow for me was the word "Evergreen" and" Dodger". If you want to think about eliminating those words and just going from there it might even out the flow. Sometimes too many words can be too many. Just a thought.....
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Review of Her  
Review by 1leila123
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I was amazed as I read this throug since it has deep emotion and shows your hidden talents! You have a gift in using descriptive phrase and it gave me a view of what hold this girl had on you! Keep up the good work! I will be back to look on your portfolio! Leila
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Review of Courage  
Review by 1leila123
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I read this and suffered right along with the person going thru it! It pulled me in and kept me there wanting to kow more of how this father felt. So many are confined to wheechairs and until their story is told like you have here, no one can really know how much strengh it takes to live for them. Very good and you have a way with words that make a reader want more! Leila
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Review of Winds of Change  
Review by 1leila123
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjpyed this article! I could see how my life co-incided with the winds of change. You had the paragraphs broke up where it was easy to read and it all made sense! LOL!! The only thing I could say was not right was this 3rd paragraph. (it our reaction or )inaction . Maybe an appostophe and an s after (it) ? Of course it's your writing .
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Review of Stirred  
Review by 1leila123
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I liked this piece and it was a good read. To me it made a lot of sense, the only thing is the part about {to earn, to pay etc was too much. Leave out most of the {to's) and it sounds better as far as the flow of words. This is only my view.
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Review of Loneliness  
Review by 1leila123
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a very deep moving poem and I enjoyed it immensely! It held me spell bound and transported me into it as I kept on reading. One thing that threw me off was the "or at the end of one line. But it's up to you whether to leave it there. Keep writing these thought provoking poems!
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Review of Paper World.  
Review by 1leila123
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoyed this! It gave me something to really think on and touched me deeply! Each time I read it I would get a new slant on it! Keep up the good writing and deep thoughts. Remember to share them with us!!LOL!!! Leila
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Review of AIDS Prayer  
Review by 1leila123
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I thought you did an amazing job on this poem! The second to last line had the word "some" at the end and to my way of thinking that could be deleted. It ruins the flow of the whole poem. But that is only my opinion. You explain the disease so well that I think this would be a helping hand to others, Keep writing! Blessings Leila
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Review by 1leila123
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really liked this poem and it has a lot of feeling in it. I had never jeard of the term Ghazal so it was new to me! I learn just by communication and going through your port! Thanks Leila
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Review of Cold Hearted  
Review by 1leila123
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem has a lot of intense feeling in it and like you said it is a little depressing. But I liked it except some of the lines were a little longer than what I am used to. I especially liked this verse:

I am yet a half baked soul,
One day I’ll go to Him.
Till then in this vast ocean,
By His grace, I shall swim.

Keep writing, you show a lot of promise!!
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Review by 1leila123
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem has a lot of feeling in it and I could identify each of those in every verse. It was veru well writtian and this verse below touched my soul!! You have a wonderfull gift for writing that touches the heart of all who reads them. Her's the verse I liked best!

I am yet a half baked soul,
One day I’ll go to Him.
Till then in this vast ocean,
By His grace, I shall swim.
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Review by 1leila123
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoyed your thoughts and opinions on malpractice in the states and India. At first I thought it would bore me but it helpd my interest thruout. I had a little trouble with some of the words (not layman terms) but I could grasp most of it. The writing was a little, how do I say it, professional tems, like this sentence:

where the aim of the retrospective study was to find out the reliability of medical malpractice adjudication

I especially liked this following part:

and hospitals in USA buy heavy professional indemnity insurance. Ultimately, the public is the sufferer because high insurance premia paid by doctors to insurance companies ensure that the same are recovered from the patients through heavy consultation fees. This, in fact, explains what is wrong with the healthcare system in USA.
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Review of Not on your life.  
Review by 1leila123
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This story reminds me of a possesive person or a jealous person that is trying to explain their feelings. I may be wrong but that's my take on it. It's very deep with feelings and at times it seems the person is full of a kind of remourse. I liked it except it felt like it jumped around a lot so it was hard following a theme. thanks for letting me read it. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Review of PEACE  
Review by 1leila123
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a fantastic poem and I enjoyed reading it tonight! As I read it I could visulize where it was going and that is a mark of a great writer! If you can help a person feel the tone of your writings your doing awesome! Please continue writing and I'll stop by again to see what else you have! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Review of Before the Winter  
Review by 1leila123
Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed the theme of this poem even though I feel it needs more. I think it could be great if you just brought the whole thing together. Some places like the third verses left me hanging and I lost the meaning of the whole poem at this time. Maybe if you just added to it that might help. Of course it's only my opinion and I am far from being a professional so if you enjoy it the way it is, then leave it that way. I would like to see what you can really do with it with time. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Review of Enduring Flame  
Review by 1leila123
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is another great poem writtian with the flair that you have! It made me think of my husband and I getting married at 16 and after 45 years still together feeling the flame with just a look! I loved it and it brought back great memories. When a poem can do that is marvelous! Thank-you!
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Review by 1leila123
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem really touched me deep inside and made me think as I read it! I even read it through several times and as I went along I could connect to what it was saying. Usually I have trouble with poems especially deep ones like this but I have to say you outdid yourself when you wrote this so I had to give you a five rating. I dont believe you could make it better so no room for improvement. You should be proud of it!
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Review of I'm here  
Review by 1leila123
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This one I enjoyed! It was short and to the point but can be taken several different ways! I still like your way with putting words together and still coming out making sense. I would love to see more of your writings here and will check back in your port more often. Leila
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Review of Deal with it?  
Review by 1leila123
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Rated: E | (4.5)
You certainly have a way with words my firend! Very descriptive all the way through. The onlly thing I can see to correct is a lot of your sentences are too long which to me as a reader they ramble. Shorter sentences would help break it up and keep a readers interest. You have a brilliant way with words by the way.
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Review of In Memory of Me  
Review by 1leila123
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem hits hard and comes with a message. It caused me to stop and think about what we would leave behind when we pass away. Solumn thoughts but maybe for some of us we will rethink our lifes and try and do better. Like me I could take a spelling class! Ha! No kidding the poem was very good and I applaude you in writing in a very hard subject.
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