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Review of An Acrostic Poem  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Birthday's in the WdC,
Is appropriate to see.
Liking your form and structure,
Letting the words flow without rupture.

Keeping up the good work for 6 more years.
Here in this place, let your words spill.
Achieving anniversaries and genuine cheers,
Keeping the memories alive it's such a thrill.
In recognition of your anniversary this acrostic is presented to Bill Khaki, the one who has the skills and talent to shine.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Lucky Coin  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Not a bad little piece created from a prompt.
There is happiness and contentment there.
There is life happening before the readers eyes.
Formed distinctly.
Flowing as smooth as a stream.
Paced at a gentle jaunt up the lane. Grammatically clean as a whistle = no suggestions for improvement.
Write on!
Copenator out!


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Review of The Memory  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sadness is found in this poem.
Child abuse is a real horror and still goes on even in a time when everyone knows it's wrong.
The emotion is deep and real, the reader cannot help but feel the pain.
The rhyming is excellent, it lends a melodious tone to the piece.
The flow is smooth and grammatically clean as a whistle. The pace is slow and steady on.
Grammatically the piece is clean.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Newgrange  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Rich heritage is in the piece.
There is a pride of lineage that goes back centuries.
The form and structure are solidly constructed.
The rhyming scheme is superb, and creates a sense of a ballad going on here.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow and rightly so.
Grammatically you have a masterpiece.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Shannon:

Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 02-17-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

It's been a while since I've been able to do any reviewing in the place that I love doing it the most. Every time I open my email and see the NLs, I know I'm going to find some good fodder from which to review. This piece, your piece in fact, is just one more fantastic piece in this NL you put together.
I was happy to see a white case included in the mix and the story was quite comppelling too. You did an excellent job as usual with this NL.
Back to the piece at hand.
A piece that explores abuse and the mess it makes of one's life who has lived through it. I myself am a survivor of abuse and could identify with the pain and turmoil Tucker has gone through.
The emotion within this piece is so real, and the reader has no trouble identifying with much of it.
The flow is smooth and is grammatically pristine.
The pace is slow ans the reader follows the steps of Tucker to the point where he was contemplating ending it all. The prayer for "one person", was answered and thank the Lord for that. It is a hopeful ending that is refreshing to see.
The pace is break neck speed but yet not hard to follow at all. You are a gifted writer and I'm thankful you closed the NL with your piece. Not a single suggestion for improvement can be made at this time.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Charley's Story  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 02-17-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

A compelling story that is worthy of publication in so many places.
Humanity needs to see and read more of this, because it shows the good, the bad, and the great in the heart of mankind.
If I was a publisher, this would be published in every medium at my disposal. Paperback, Readers Digest, e-book, kindle and whatever the latest craze is.
Form and structure are well laid out.
Flow is smooth and emotionally charged.
The pace is slow, fast, medium, and in other places just amazingly creeping along.
All this in a grammatically flawless format makes it worthy of 10 stars at the least!
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Balancing Act  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 02-17-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

I just want to cheer!
The lady has lost her fear.
The emotional tags are real,
The happiness, sadness, and joy one does feel.
The flow is easy going.
The pace is detail showing.
Grammatically nary a jot nor tittle has gone awry,
So not a single piece of improvement must you apply.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of The Elevator Man  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 02-17-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

What a moving story.
The tale is written so well.
The reader is empathetic with the elevator man.
The emotional tags along the way are genuine and the reader cannot help but identify with many of them.
The form and structure are rock solid.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is medium and there appears to be no grammatical issues to slow the progress of the stories tempo.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SherriG by reviewing for her group
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 12-23-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Thank you for keeping Christ in the equation.
He truly is the reason for the season.
And the gift continues on for those who believe.
There is a sense of reverence in here.
The lines are strategically placed and with respect laid out.
The flow is smooth and grammatically pristine.
The pace is slow and sensory filled.
In the end the reader is thankful for the simplicity and the awe found in this piece.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 11-25-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

It's cool to see your C-Note shop in here. It looks like you have a ton of others for different times of the year.
You have a good selection and it is worthy of a visit to be sure.
Thanks for sharing with the WdC,
you are important to God; your loved ones; the WdC; and Copenator out!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 11-25-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

More tradition seen from the eyes of one who grew tired of it but now know how important it really was after all.
The lesson here is to cherish life and to live it to the fullest, with your family and friends.
Form and structure are standard fare.
Flow is smooth and sensory stimulating, keeping the reader in the tale.
Pace is slow and rightly so, for there is much to garner from this traditional thanksgiving day event.
Grammatically speaking; nary a jot no tittle has gone awry.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SherriG by reviewing for her group
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 11-25-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Ah family traditions and the dysfunction that goes with it. You have a good story with a substantial amount of meat upon which to chew.
Form and structure are rock solid.
Emotionally the reader sides with Bettie. Who'd of thunk mister right would come into her life at just the right time.
Flow is smooth and this is enhanced by a grammatically squeaky clean write.
Pace is slow and in the end the reader is happy to know there is a happy ending.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you Sherri.


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 11-25-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

A heart warming tale of a thanksgiving ride to grandma's house. The story is chock full of emotion that the reader uses to identify with along the way.
The flow is so smooth, it's as if one were on an ice covered lake skating along through your story.
The pace is slow and detail filled. The lessons learned transcend one family to that of every family member who happens to read your tale.
Grammatically speaking you are spot on!
I'm glad Shannon put your piece in the pages of her NL.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ten out of 16.
Thanks for the relaxing quiz.
It's people like you who take the time to create these that makes the WdC a nicer place to hang out and relax.
The questions were in various fields, a well rounded sampling indeed.
The choices made one think about the best answer.
Keep sharing!
You are important and that's the truth to you loved ones, the WdC, and Copenator out!
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I thought I knew more about Stephen King than 5 out of 5. Of course I have not picked up any of his works in a few decades. I guess I moved out of the horror section after a period in my life.
But it was still fun to go back and see that SK is still influencing others who are more into the horror genre than I am lately.
I know "Haven" is based on one of his novels because I watch that on demand or the dvr'd ones often.
Thanks for putting the quiz together so the WdCrs can have a brief respite from the toils of day to day life.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Doing My Part  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Thanks for your perspective on how the front page receives it's stories. More politics and timing than importance of the story. I'll look at the front page a little differently from now on.
I liked the emotion that you displayed in this piece. It's almost a cathartic thing, you've taken your stand and drawn the line in the sand. No going back for you. Or at least that's what I heard from these words.
Flow is smooth and pace is slow.
The reader is kept in the story from stem to stern and finding no grammatical snafu's, no suggestions for improvement can be made for your complete package.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Kylee  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A nice little photo album of your daughter Kylee. I never played sports but I did appreciate those who were able to. Kylee sounds like a well rounded athlete and it's good to read that she also coaches younger people in the sport of Lacross. That's giving back to the community in a grand way.
You are important in keeping the history of your family alive and thank you for sharing your photos so others might be able to know more about you, the author who roams the halls of the wondrous WdC.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Writing.Com!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your word search about the Wdc.
It reminds one just how much is available on the site.
It just scratches the surface because I know there is education that goes on too in the halls of the WdC.
I like the way the words you find go gray or are crossed out as you go and the different directions you can go to find a word. I twas a challenge, to be sure, and it's always fun to find something that stimulates the senses.
The best thing I liked about it is seeing StroyMaster and StoryMistress in the the mix because yall are the heart and soul of the WdC.
Praying for the family still and know that you are not alone. Your friends in the WdC are just an email or IM away.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA M Div
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Found your event in the Contests and Activites Newsletter 11-18-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

I liked the overall setup of this contest.
The incentives are adequate to entice the prospective author.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow and methodically leads to the end.
There are no visible grammatical bumps in the road and you are thanked for the NL and the contest you sponsor to the benefit of the WdC.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found your event in the Contests and Activites Newsletter 11-18-15
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Wow! What an impressive undertaking going on here.
I've sponsored writers in the past and wish to again next year.
It's always cool to see the handles touting the NaNo spectacular. There is a rich history for this event in the WdC and it looks like it will continue for years to come.
The reader of this activity is well informed as what is expected as a participant and as a sponsor.
the rules are explicit and the prizes are stunningly displayed.
The flow is smooth.
the pace is somewhat slow; considering all that needs to be covered.
Grammatically speaking nary a jot nor tittle was observed going awry. What a testament to your attention to detail, given the massive size of this activity forum.
Praying a blessing over the conclusion of this event and thanking you for giving back to so many groups at the end of the activity. It's in giving to others in the WdC that we find our humanity is intact for at least another day.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Mumsy:
Found your event in the Contests and Activities Newsletter 11-18-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

I've been a student of the Hebrew language so the alphabet was appealing to me. I liked the way you named the tables that way.
Overall your contest is well laid out in this forum.
The flow is excellent.
The pace is slow, and rightly so, as there is much meat to chew upon along the way.
Grammatically your forum is a blessing and I pray a blessing over the success of this game during the Hanukkah season.
You are thanked for sponsoring this activity, because without you there would be one less activity to participate in. Keep it going!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your event in the Contests and Activites Newsletter 11-18-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.
Huge rewards got my attention. Man you were not idding either. The characters you receive must be at their peak and well identified in the entries you receive.
Your introductory blurb is efficient and lays out the contest in a digestible form.
The flow is smooth and enhanced by a grammatically pristine rendition.
My eyes popped when I saw the prizes. Wow! Now that's worth the chance to go for it alone.
The rules are distinct and there is no room for questioning what can and cannot disqualify an entry.
The pace is steady on and by the end the reader can decide if it is something they can give their attention to.
Overall impression of this survey format is one of a very professional and polished presentation that is worthy of the time it takes to scour the layout.
Praying a blessing over the contest now and in future rounds and that the characters submitted will soon be the seeds of future writing for the contestants.
Well done!!!!!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of the nightmare  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 11-18-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Whew, glad it was a dream.
Otherwise you might not have finished this story.
Wondering if it was a human or perhaps a werewolf. Your tale take the reader by the throat and leads us along.
Form and structure are solid.
Rhyming helps with the smooth flow.
The pace is rather rapid as the scene unfolds in that fashion.
Grammatically speaking, no grand infractions were perceived and no suggestions for improvement are needed this day.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the comedy Newsletter 11-18-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

A repeat in this NL.
I see such imagery here.
The crab apple tree deserves a rating of 93.
It's so alive and so full of emotion.
The reader is drawn into the tale and goes nowhere else.
Flowing with such ease at a pace that is slow and yet sensory filled.
Prosaic nature suits the dialogue well.
Grammatically speaking, nary a jot nor tittle is found to have gone awry.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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