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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 11-12-15
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A touching elegy.
I know she often battled illness and prayers were sent up for her recovery, in the end we lost her and the light in the WdC is a little dimmer for it.
The reader can feel the emotion that comes from the heart.
the rhyme scheme gives this piece a sense of a song being sung in honor of SerriG.
The flow is so smooth, as if it is from a seasoned writer who knows how to craft his message well.
The pace is slow and methodical. Filled with much love and respect for oen who meant so much to the writer in the WdC.
Grammatically your piece is pristine.
Nary a jot nor tittle, would this writer suggest improving upon.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SherriG by reviewing for her.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 11-12-15
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I feel a sense of cleansing going on through this piece.
Almost like this is a prayer to the Lord to do something to the heart and soul of this writer.
Done in a well formed framework.
Flow smoothly and enhanced by a grammatically snafu clean piece.
Paced at a slow and steady pace. The reader gathers the words and takes them to heart in the end.
No suggestions for improvement can be made for such a well written piece.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 11-12-15
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The truth emerges in the end.
The singer using generalities to his advantage.
This is poetic in nature,
akin to a minstrel telling a tale, to all who would hear.
Emotionally the reader gets a sense of observing a ritual performed numerous times a day.
Flowing ever so smoothly.
Paced at a slow pace, because the reader is still listening to all that is being said.
You do this in a grammatically clean form and one can but encourge you to;

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 11-12-15
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"He who has an ear, let him hear."
"Listen to me!"
"I'm listening."

It's all about listening and truly hearing what another is saying or writing.
Your piece says a lot and the reader is walked along on the journey.
Emotionally: the admontion to listen shines through.
Flowing at an easy gait,
Your poem is light and full of substance.
Paced at a slow stroll, the reader is left to decide what he/she hears from this piece.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed at all.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 11-12-15
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I thought this was going to be about listening.
When in fact it is about getting your reader to listen.
That is the feeling I get from this piece.

Done in a form that is consistent and easy to follow.
Flowing gently from one point to the next, greatly enhanced by a grammatically pristine piece of work.
Pace is slow as the reader listens to the thoughts you are creating.
This reader would not recommend a single change. All is said with such grace.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Lies  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey Jen; I found this in the newsfeed.

Outstanding! This is in fact a song that can be so easily added to in order to create the next hit.
You have a true and heartfelt emotional piece.
The reader feels the sadness, anger, and distrust.
The rhyming is stellar!
It lends that melodic timber that makes it feel like a songs beginning.
The flow is as smooth as silk.
Nary a jot nor tittle have gone awry.
The pace is slow and deliberate.
Your readers know in the end that this came from the heart and that's where the best writing comes.
How could anyone suggest ways of improvement? You ave a 10 as it is! So happy to have had the chance to read this piece of emotional art.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Comedy Newsletter 10-21-15
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Well played and written piece.
The characters are your average Joe's and kinda uncaring. That is until they are subjected to this version of a Christmas story that ends in a treat for the snowman.
There is humor, fear, and even some hilarity thrown in. The twist of it being Santa in the end is priceless.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and detail filled.
Grammatically speaking; no evidence was found of any infractions.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of The river  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Breva:

Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 10-21-15
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An eloquent tribute to the Ohio Rivers white caps.
Am emotion struck a chord with me; and that is one of awe.
Your imagery places me at the shore seeing those white caps, truly natures greatest masterpiece.
Flow is smooth as the water in a rivulet.
Pace is fast, as the water comes in and goes out, with the caps waving at us.
Grammatically what a masterful display of a clean slate, nary a jot nor tittle are awry.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Legends  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC!

Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 10-21-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Ah love that is unapproved of by the masses.
Throwing caution to the wind, love wins out.
Let them gossip, let them eat cake!
That is the power of your imagery that elicited this response.
Your writing skill is well developed.
Flow is smooth and easy on the eyes.
Pace is fast, as the reader follows the lines to the end.
Grammatically there is no evidence of grammatical snafu's so no suggestions for improvement are needed with this review.
Thanks for sharing in the WdC!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of brief thoughts  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 10-21-15
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A swirling collection of words you do piece together to construct complete thoughts in such a poetic way.
The prompt pop up explanation is informative.

Yes I can feel it. Your piece is alive with images that take this reader on a timeless trip.
Flow is smooth and enhanced by a grammatically clean construct.
Pace is slow, but not inexorably so. The reader is able to make it through the scene you do paint and feel at ease that his time was well spent.
Gotta rush to the next!


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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 10-21-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

I see the uniformity in your lines and marvel at how much time it must have taken to construct in this way.
There is symmetry even when it looks like a chaotic positioning of word groups.

Those words in fact come together to create a image filled poem that leaves the reader breathless.
One of the strongest lines is "walking between gentle raindrops." Boom! I'm sold on your piece.

Flow is smooth and the pace is not a race.
Grammatically speaking, there are no visible spelling snafu's and the reader is able to read through the piece with nary a stumbling block.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of The Color of Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC!

I found your piece in Spiritual Newsletter 10-20-15.
I often use the NLs for reviewing fodder.

The color of love is indeed discernible in this piece.
Your main character is one who has seen life from plenty and from lack. The reader can identify with him and the emotions he expresses throughout the tale.
That's good imagery that keeps the reader focused.

Form and structure are strong and foundational to your piece.
Flow is smooth and enhanced by the absence of any visible grammatical snafu's.
Pace is slow and rightly so, for the reader is heeding the words of this character with every fiber of their being.
Well done! Well written! Well worthy of reading many times over!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The wife takes on that task from time to time.
I sit back and curl my nose and hold the bag, closing it up as quickly as possible.
I liked your tale because it had a great element of humor to it. The scenes you opened up for us to see were possibly identifiable in many ways.
Form and structure are solid.
Flow is as smooth as a stick of butter, before the knife meets it.
Pace is slow and fueled with much humor and the desire to continue on in the quest to empty the "icebox". I still call it that a lot, and Rhonda is often saying "it's a refirigerator!" Which makes me call it icebox more. lol
Grammatically you nailed it. Nary a jot nor tittle has gone awry.

Write on!
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Review of Jerry  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 10-07-15
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A compelling tale of two men who were meant to meet and impact each other in a positive way.
Jerry Lewis is my favorite. I miss him and will mourn when he passes. When he left the MDA, it was never the same after that.
The emotion in here flows well.
The reader is wrapped up in it all.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow and detail filled.
There are a series of grammatical snafu's but the overall message is clear and the reader is glad to know there is a conclusion to the relationship between two who met for a reason.

Write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 10-07-15
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A caring look at a broken soul,
awaiting healing from the master Carpenter.
There is emotion within that the reader feels.
Pain from the broken soul.
Love and compassion from the Carpenter.
This keeps the readers attention.
Rhyme scheme is consistent and helps with a smooth flow.
A flow that is enhanced by the absence of grammatical snafu's.
All in all your piece has punch and the reader is left with a sense of peace beginning to sink in.

Write on!
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for entry "10-6-2015" 
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Happy late account anniversary.
Bless you and yours today and the rest of the week.
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the "Read A Newbie" side bar.
Liked the introductory blurb and delighted I did click through.
Your poem is alive with images that activate the readers senses.
The smells, the sounds, the sights, and more.
Good rhyming lends a sing-song like effect.
Flowing so smoothly that you wonder if you're floating on air.
Paced at a medium speed, peppered with sensory triggers to keep the reader engaged.
Spelling and other grammatical matters are nil.
Write on!
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Contests and Activities Newsletter 09-09-15
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I've seen this contest before and I think I submitted before.
You organize this distinctively.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow and detail filled.
The rules are clear.
The prizes are submission worthy.
Nary a jot nor tittle has gone awry.

Write on!
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Review of Barrier  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 09-26-15
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Emotionally, I feel that this "wall" is an internal one you are using to protect your feelings.
It's imagery well done that draws this perception forth.
Form and structure are consistent.
Flow is almost like a dance when you read it aloud.
Grammatically you have a piece that shines.

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Review of Lest We Forget  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 09-26-15
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Good to see your owrk in the NL.
You always produce the finest of writing that strikes a chord.
In this case a sense of pride in the U.S.A.; and a resolve to never forget the senselessness of terrorism on such a large scale.
Form and structure are aptly formed.
Rhyming is immaculate and lends a melodic timber.
Flow is smooth as silk.
Pace is slow and awe inspiring.
Grammatically speaking, you have a pristine display of grammar going on here.

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 09-26-15
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Congratulations on your Honorable Mention nod in Stormy's contest.

What a naturally flowing tale you do weave.
The details are clear, there is nothing you leave.
The reader sees the storm passing by,
Feels the emotions descending from on high.
Form and structure are firmly place.
Prosaic in nature, it has that poetic feel to it.
Flowing smoothly from stanza to stanza.
At a Pace that the reader can follow without missing a thing.
Grammatically speaking; you do a fine job.



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In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I would encourage you to experience the world outside.
Do not be afraid and above all do not let what others say about you cause you to retreat within.
That's the imagery you put into your piece that drew this from my heart.
Form and structure are consistent.
Prosaic in nature but it has the poetic feel to it.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and hopeful that you would find a way out from behind the bars.
No evidence of grammatical snafu's are visible.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of In A Mirror  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ah the mirror is a reflection of what goes on.
There is a multitude of emotions that the reader identifies with.
Imagery is alive and the reader sees and hears the emotions flowing through the days activities.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and then speeds up toward the end.
Grammatically you have a clean piece.
Thanks for sharing in the WdC.

Write on!
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual newsletter 09-02-15
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A very good piece about the Lord's love and grace that is for one and all. If only they will listen and respond.
Proud of you for your bold witness, and the logical and loving way you put it together.
Flow is smooth and thought provoking.
Pace is slow and senses assailing, keeping the readers attention from stem to stern.
Grammatically you have a sweet piece.
No suggestions for improvement are needed today.

Write on!
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual newsletter 09-02-15
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I see this as a review of a life from life to death.
The form and structure are adequate.
There is emotion within that keeps the readers attention and lead him to the end with ease.
The flow is smooth and efficient.
The pace is slow.
Grammatically there is not a problem to be found.

Write on!
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