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Review of Walter Engrid  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 063-25-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Thank you for sharing on the WdC and welcome!
Your character study is well rounded.
The reader knows this person is "very confident" and not afraid of the possibility of road rage as he navigates the highways and byways.

Form and structure are firmly in place.
Flow is smooth and enhanced by the clear sailing grammatically.
Pace is slow and detail filled. The reader gets to know this Walter and kinda likes the ole fella.

One question comes to mind. How did you choose the name of your character?

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Wait  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ayrie:

Found your item in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 063-25-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.
Two of your items are in here. Congrats!

As I read this one I notice something.
Some of your lines feel a little too long.
Line 6, for example can be shortened to make your piece a little more symmetrical.
There are emotional tags that the reader can identify with.
Your progression from one item to the next is good and enhances the smooth flow of this.
Form and structure re adequate; save for the aforementioned line 6.
Flow is only slightly rough due to the long line.
Pace is slow and detail filled.
You get your message out and that's always what the author wants to do.
Well done!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Soulmate  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ayrie:

Found your item in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 063-25-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Just a word about the rating you placed "13+". Upon reading this it is more suitable as "E", for everyone.
There is nothing in your piece that would be inappropriate.
Emotion is present in a natural way.
Form and structure are awesome.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is not too fast, just right to be sure.
Grammatically you have no visible spelling errors, which lends to the smooth flow you have here.
Thanks for sharing in the WdC and welcome!



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Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Silent Stones  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 06-25-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Congratulations on your Honorable Mention nod in Stormy's contest.
I like the progression from the ornate and finely paved road, down to the dirt road that leads the reader to his/her destination.
A cemetery that was once well kept, but is now in disrepair.
The imagery you use make the piece come to life.
There is a sense of awe and respect for the cemetery and it's residents.
Form and structure are uniform and consistent.
Flow is smooth and sensory filled.
Pace is slowly progressing, as the author regales the reader with a grammatically snafu piece.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the wdC!
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 06-25-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Congratulations on your first place win in Stormy's contest.
It's a fine piece indeed.
There is a melancholy to this piece.
Your poem is well constructed.
The reader is engaged in the lines.
The flow is like liquid gold.
The pace is slow and methodical.
There is no evidence of any grammatical snafu's.
Your piece is the tops, and that's the truth.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Toymaker  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC!
Found your item in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 03-17-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.
One word comes to mind: Magical.
You paint a magical picture of the "world" you create here.
A color cavalcade of words do reign.
The form and structure are exquisite.
There is a sense of contentment here and that reflects in the poem you lay down.
The flow is smooth and interesting.
the pace is slow and sensory filled.
Nary a jot nor tittle are out of place. Yay!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC!
Found your item in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 03-17-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Bam! What an awesome punch line!
Form and structure are straightforward.
Flow is natural and smooth.
Pace is slow and sensory filled.
Grammatically speaking, you piece sparkles!
Thanks for sharing and you are encouraged to,

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 03-04-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Glad you put in the disclaimer that this is a work of fiction.
There is real emotion in this and graphic details that grip the readers heart and mind.
Evil incarnate has emerged and done the unspeakable.
The reader wants justice for the victims parents.
Form and structure are uniform.
Flow is smooth and senses shattering at time.
Pace is slow and methodical, as the story is laid out in layers.
Grammatically your piece is clean and you are encouraged to,

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 6-16-15
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Yep the parable of the sower is a good verse indeed.
The point is well taken, we have to leave the four walls behind and seed the fields we have at our disposal.
Form and structure are appropriate.
Flow is a bit slow.
Pace is slow too, and rightly so.
Grammatically speaking, no visible snafu's peek out over the grass you lay down in your piece.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Rebirth-day  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 6-16-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

What a senses filled piece.
It's really a wonderful picture of your life up to then, and the past events that brought you through the years.
Form is a bit rough but nothing is lost in this pre-birthday reverie.
Flow is not lost by the paragraph spacing, and the pace is slow as the scene comes into view and the reader is mesmerized by your crystal clear depiction.
Grammatically snafu free, I'd love to give you a thirty-three.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of The Gold Locket  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC Josie.
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 6-16-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Has your dad passed away?
This is the question that arises.
If so; sorry for your loss.
If this is fiction, then you have created a real image.
That's the kind of writing that keeps the readers attention.
The uniformity of your stanzas, lends a smooth flow.
The locket evokes memories from many, as they were once a standard ornament worn on a chain around the neck.
The reader can see the locket opening; the memories bursting forth; and the memories fading as the locket is closed.
Prose that is poetry in motion.
All at a pace that is slow and rightly so.
With a crisp and clean slate as far as grammatically snafus.
You have a 10 right here.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC!
Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 6-16-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Poetry in motion.
The emotions are real.
It's like a love letter to the King of kings.
Form and structure are standard and well suited.
Flow is smooth and the pace is rapid.
Nothing is missed as the piece carries the reader to the final lines.
Pouring onto the paper, your devotion and gratitude to Jesus , with each stroke of the pen.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Noticing Newbies Nl 6-13-16 has your piece.
The theme was color and your piece its the bill.
Form and structure are adequately impressive.
There is emotion peppered throughout the piece and the reader is "glued" to the display.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and inexorably draws you to the conclusion that Green is better.
Yay!
Grammatically snafu free, you get a thirty-three.
*Bigsmile*

Write on!
Copenator out!
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Red Tears  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
You're in Noticing newbies NL 6-16-15
Sarajean's theme was color and yours surely fits the bill.
Form and structure are consistent.
What starts off innocently enough quickly grows sinister.
I liked the switch from one to the other; quite seamless and effective.
Prosaic in nature there is a melodic tone to this piece,
even when the tone changes and the tempo picks up. Wow!
Flow is a smooth as silk.
Pace is slow and methodical, with senses shattering switches to the very end.
Grammatically snafu free, yippee!

Write on!
Copenator out!
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Dearest Friend  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | N/A (Unratable.)
Found this on the Hub.
Wow!
What a song this does create.
A song of friendship that is lasting.
The form and structure are adequate.
The flow is smooth even with the addition of the counterpoint.
That pace is slow and sensory filled.
Grammatically there are no matters to address.

Write on!
Copenator out!
founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
An intense poem you do pen.
The anticipation mounts and boom!
In the end 'tis but fiction.
About a war that does commence.

Your choice of words is superb.'
Through those words the reader is ensconced there with the group.
Form and structure are adequate.
Rhyming is present.
Flow is reminiscent.
Pace is fast,
And the reader is at the last.
Grammatically you are spot on!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ah the things that are in the woods.
Your surprise was genuine when the skunk came into view.
The reader is placed right in the scene with your imagery.
Form and structure are appropriate.
Rhyming scheme lends an even and smooth flow to the piece.
Pace is slow and in the end there is relief that "Le parfum de pugh" did not occur this time.
Grammatically your piece is as clean as a whistle.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC.
A stunning picture you do paint.
The face in the mirror is a stranger.
The reader can see the face,
Can hear the fear and feel the dread.

Form and structure are solid.
Rhyme scheme is superb and lends to the flow of your piece.
Flow is smooth and grammatically clean.
Pace is slow and detail filled.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
foudner of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Deception  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC!
I found your review request in the Hub.
What a story you did weave.
This has the feel of a polished writer.
The characters have substance, the emotion in the scenes are real and impacting.
Form and structure are adequate.
Flow is smooth and polished.
Pace is slow, as the reader absorbs the full impact of the result of one woman's choice to eliminate one who she thought was cheating on her.
This is a grammatically clean and crisp piece which appears to be page 4 of 4?
Thank you for sharing in the WdC.

Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of Finder's Keepers  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
You have a cool style.
The lines are quite level.
There is feeling galore,
The reader seeks to know more.

Form and structure are poetry in motion.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow, and rightly so,
as you pepper your lines with the love you feel for your "chosen" one.
Grammatically speaking, no visible issues occur.
Write on!
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The mosquitoes are rampant anon.
The month of May is gone, but still they pester.
Form and structure are standard.
Flow is smooth.
There is much the reader can relate to and that's the imagery that keeps him/her in the loop.
Pace is steady on, unhindered by any grammatical snafu's.
Write on and welcome to the WdC!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your item in the Contests and Activities Newsletter 5-20-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Your contest is a staple in the WdC.
The forum is well organized.
The rules are clear,
The rewards are enticing,
The overall appeal is inviting.
Genre writing can be a challenge but this contest encourages the writer to maybe step out of his/her comfort zone and try another with a chance to make come big GPs to boot.
Thanks for supporting the WdC in this way.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Alyssa:

Your poem is a breath of fresh air.
It speaks of treating people fair.
The bully is all in the zone,
Until at last the object of his ridicule does intone.

The form and structure are appropriate.
The rhyming lends a musical timber to the piece.
The flow is smooth, and enhanced by a lake of grammatical snafu's.
The pace is slow and sensory filled.
The major emotional tags are sadness, anger, and then contrition.
One suggestion would be to separate your piece into 4 stanzas each.
This way the reader has a little time to digest the message you are conveying in each of your lines.

Thank you for sharing in the WdC and my your experience here be one of growth and encouragement every day.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Noticing newbies Newsletter 5-20-15
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Ah the Zombie Apocalypse cometh forth.
I was not expecting the twist you introduced toward the end.
Chapter one has a lot to consider.
The scenery is almost visible to the readers eyes, and that's good imagery.
Your form and structure are the founding stakes of the piece.
The flow is smooth, as the leading character begins his journey.
The pace is slow and sensory stimulating.
Grammatically speaking; no visible missteps were detected.
Thank you for sharing in the WdC!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of White Tornadoes  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Found your piece in the Noticing newbies Newsletter 5-20-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

The reader is transported to the scene of an illicit affair going on.
Your imagery is poignant. The main feeling is that of "regret for having started all this."
Form and structure are significant.
Flow is smooth and sensory lined.
Pace is slow and resolute to the end, as the "girlfriend" must anew await her "lovers" return.
GRammatically clean as a whistle, thanks for sharing in the WdC!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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