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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
A happy poem about the beauty of the tropical climate.
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A poem with a first letter acrostic of Paraguay Rocks.
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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
The author attempts to have plans to meet his/her needs. The problem is the plans never quite meet the needs. Xxx
SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:
Continue to modify your plans until you find what works for you.
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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
Two stanzas with direction for poets wether it be horses or fishes.
POETRY INFORMATION:
Two four line verses with rhyming scheme of A A B B.
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Short poetic quip about the birthday of the author.
POETRY INFORMATION:
Three verses of four lines. The rhyming scheme is A B C B.
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I guess many people have the same number sequence.
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A bit of confusion as to how these two young men get involved with ancient Egyptian practices.
PLOT & CHARACTERS:
A short story where two students exploring Egyptian history are caught up in some mumyifing as in ancient times.
SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:
In the end the Egyptian priest is sliding a brain hook thru the young man's nose.
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I enjoyed the flow of this poem. I feel the snow and the ashes from the fireplace. The connection of snow falling gives a romantic background for the poem.
POETRY INFORMATION:
There is five verses wth three lines with a rhyming scheme of A B A. there is then a fin 4 line verse with a rhyming scheme of A B A A.
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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
Everyone needs luck. There is never enough luck.
POETRY INFORMATION:
The poem is completely in free verse.
SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:
May you have all the luck you need.
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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
I didn not find that this poem had much meditation at all let alone looking particularly at faith.
It seemed more like a trip into outer space than anything to do with faith.
POETRY INFORMATION:
Four verses all in free verse and not really feeling the essence of poetry.
I guess I am just a little too much being part of old school thinking. Meditation should be a quiet reflective experience.
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It seems a simple little story. The old Grandfather gives the young boy an old horn telling him it scares fairies. All the boy sees is that it scares the cat and she runs away when he blows it. The final paragraph shows us that the horn truly scares the fairie.
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A short little episode about the dog named June getting entangled with the hammock on the back deck. The alternate storyline deals with the need for a caffeine fix in the morning.
SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:
The confusion about the screaming made it harder for me to grasp the problem initially. Do dogs actually scream? Question side naps my mind.
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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
Last words are always important and significant. They can be full of sadness and grief or be composed with singing and dancing and thereby be joyous and happy. It is perhaps important to have both in their own time.
POETRY INFORMATION:
Three verses of free verse.
SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:
Well prepared and touching. It could share more of the different types of last words.
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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
There is a sense of boredom and unfulfillment in this short essay. This woman has not found a true relationship and seems to be seeking but as yet has not found what she is seeking.
SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:
Develop a plan for the future. with some definite plans.
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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
We live our lives in a world with so many questions. The author of this essay has so many questions. There is a multitude of things in the gospels that require our searching in order to get the truths that God has prepared for our examination. Besides, there are many physical aspects that we need to research in order to have a better understanding of our world. In these days it is more important to grasp our aspect of nature.
SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:
Global warming and so many issues need our attention.
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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
A short story almost out of the twilight zone.
SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:
Expectations that something sinister will happen seem to fill my mind. I was expecting something more sinister.
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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
is interesting that I have chosen to review this poem on mother s day. The last line of this poem is the real message. It is the smell of home and love.
POETRY INFORMATION:
Seven lines of free verse which depicts the childhood love of nature.
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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
A poem about knowing true freedom. It is based in never saying no, never giving up hope.
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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
Laying back with the mind looking at quiet but lovely moments. Seeking the peace and quiet of one's memories and thoughts.
POETRY INFORMATION:
There are six verses. The first five have 3 lines and the last has four lines.
All use rhyming scheme of A B A.
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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
A poem about a person realizing his/her need to rely on their relationship with their higher power.
POETRY INFORMATION:
nine lines of free verse poetry.
SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:
No suggestions. Poem connects with the dual rekationship.
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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
A plaintive voice calling out from the crowd but there is no answer. But no one bothers to respond.
POETRY INFORMATION:
Completely free verse.
SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:
The ignoring of the patients except for their basic medical needs seems cruel but it is the truth in most seniors
homes.
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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
The husband gives his wife a stuffed squirrel representing a figure from a TV show. She doesn't like it but finds out later it is valuable.
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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
An understanding where the poet is not only concerned by nature but is actually involved by nature.
POETRY INFORMATION:
Ten lines all starting with the word I Entire poem is free verse.
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Some cowboys chatting about the dangers of their present location.
PLOT & CHARACTERS:
The plot is about the speed of one of the cowboys and then expands to the dangers of indian tribes and which were following them.
SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:
It seems that danger is iminate. Need more of the story.
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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
A poem about Christmas with all the fables and tall tales being dismissed as lies.
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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
Mother's Day is days away. Poem is based on Mother's love.
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