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Review of Fibonacci Spring  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of Fibonacci Spring

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Fibonacci poems create a design. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

The poem expresses the beauty of spring time.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Crystal's Charms  
Review by dblameck (David)
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)



Review of Crystal"s Charms

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

This short story is a great image filled with descriptions of the dangers and evil of this drug. It tells the story of a young woman with great potential and plans who starts to use this drug and then goes on to detail the drastic changes in this young woman. The detail of the changes is frightening.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Should be read by anyone considering to use or flirt with using this drug.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Sea Stories  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of Sea Stories

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A flash fiction story of a new sailor having to perform a task which she assumes is another of the pranks that new sailors are asked to perform to express their unfamiliarity with nautical matters. Whether it be a left-handed spanner or a gallon of checkered paint. Picking up mail from a buoy actually was done in the era of clipper ships.

GENERAL INFORMATION:

A good story with nautical overtones. I enjoyed adding the dolphin into the story.
The feeling of seasickness was brought to mind with rolling and pitching of the seaboat.

FINAL THOUGHTS:


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Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of Fair Weather Friends

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

The thoughts behind the words are very true and personal to me. How my friends support me is even more important in the difficult days I am currently dealing with.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Three verses made up of pairs of rhyming couplets.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I think the message is clear and I hope people take note.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Ocean magic  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of Ocean Magic

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A beautiful poem that champions the joys of putting your toes in the pounding surf.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

I envision walking barefoot at the rolling edge of warm water as it foams between my toes.
I really enjoyed your poem.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Great poem. Thanks for sharing this item!

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Review of FlashBacks  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)


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Anniversary Review of flashbacks

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A poem about remembrances. Noting how things tend to change.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

A poetic review of the past

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of The New Clothes  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of The New Clothes

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A flash fiction story about a woman walking under a ladder and getting red paint splattered on her. A romance ensues.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Walking under a ladder is always dangerous. Paint dropped, new clothes bought love ensues.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Mask  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of Mask

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Poem about a mask. The poem is formed into a diatelle.

POETRY INFORMATION:

The Diatelle is a fun, syllable counting form like the etheree with a twist. The syllable structure of
the diatelle is as follows: 1/2/3/4/6/8/10/12/10/8/6/4/3/2/1, but unlike an ethere, has a set rhyme
pattern of abbcbccaccbcbba. This poetry form may be written on any subject matter and looks
best center aligned in a diamond shape.



FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Gone  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: ASR | (3.5)



Review of Gone

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Poem about a broken watch.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Free Verse.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of My Angel, My Sweetheart

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A love poem where the male is appreciative of the female.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Two four line verses are composed of two rhyming couplets.

FINAL THOUGHTS:


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Review of Landsgolden  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.0)


Review of Landsgolden

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A flash fiction story with a touch of mystery.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Jenny a first time baby sitter reads a mysterious book and disappears.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Something is missing from the story.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Nightmare  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of Nightmare

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Good read and development. A story told from the point of view of a horse.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

It was an interesting story. Write more. :

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Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of The Dress From the Goodwill Store (/b)

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A good story. very descriptive.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Five verses, Each verse with six lines with composed of three rhyming couplets.


FINAL THOUGHTS:


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Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (5.0)



Review of From the Ground Up

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Interesting advertisement for a poetry creation class.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I might look into taking this class.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)



Review of Attack of the Plot Bunnies

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A poetic punch at the plot bunnies (those unplanned plot twists)

{c: blue}POETRY INFORMATION:

Random rhyming lines. No metre detected.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

A plot map might aid the author.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Eppie  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)



Review of Eppie

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Family drama set in Jane Austen England. Compelling story of a family fighting against power to achieve respect and power.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Not noted

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of The Fall  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of The Fall

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A short poem where the writer links falling in love similar to falling from a height.

POETRY INFORMATION:

Five verses with a rhyming scheme of A B A B

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Romance is evident in the words but it leaves much.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of Today was SH Crappy

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A young person feels depressed because he/she feels he/she is not appreciated.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The frustration felt by this person is intense and they need to look for emotional support.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Keep writing this type of expression is important.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Angel Fingers  
Review by dblameck (David)
Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of Angel Fingers

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A good story of a not-so-pleasant situation at the end of a vacation.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

American tourists traveling in Chile and riding the subway sadly have a wallet pick pocked.
They deal with the Chilean police and the interaction seems beneficial.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

More detail of police interaction.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Good Story. Thanks for sharing this item!


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Review of Money Talks  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.5)



Review of Money Talks

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A confusing story thatle is almost completely in dialogue.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Characters stand out but the plot seems less direct.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Tie this scenario into a larger story.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of Class School Trip  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (3.5)



Review of Class School Trip

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

I feel like I've been dropped into the middle of a story.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

I am not sure what is going on. I note the two characters of John and Jennifer are the centre of the action.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Fill out the story.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (4.0)



Review of Building Alexandria

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Rebuilding a society that has been destroyed by scavenging destroyed libraries.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The youth is leading the way.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

None

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)



Review of Bookish

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OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

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PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Short and simple story that is very entertaining. Great characters.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Perfect as it is.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of God loves you  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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Anniversary Review of God Loves You

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

J have known this since my late teens but I thank you for writing this poem to remind me.


PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Gods great plan

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Second line first verse should not it be sins touch.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

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Review of A Helping Hand  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (3.5)



Review of A Helping Hand

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work. I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A journalist is doing an investigative piece. He is pretending to be homeless and trying to live on the streets of Pittsburg. It is well written and follows an easily written format.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The researcher spends his time at a homeless shelter and in the end provides a substantial i=gift to the shelter.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Fill out the story with more detail.

FINAL THOUGHTS:


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