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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Won't find me out on a dark country road alone on Holloween! Great story.
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Review of Country Life  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Ok did they get away from the potato monsters? I liked this story made me smile.
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Review of Learning to Walk  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading this, it is so very true. We sew the seeds and God helps it to grow. Faith and prayer are what is required of us.
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404
Review of Departure  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Good poem, I could see the volcano rising!
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405
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good story, makes you rethink taking someone to the bank!
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406
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I have enjoyed this story, I am waiting for the next chapter.
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Review of A Purple Heart  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very sweet poem for your mother. I am sure she loved it.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am enjoying this story.
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409
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
So far I am liking the story very much.
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Review of Busted  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very cute story. A good reason to dig holes and help mom at the same time. Glad Mom had a sense of humor.
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411
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was very interesting reading, the treatment of the Native Americans was horrendous!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Loved this story! I love science fiction and I would like to see this as a movie. I think you wrote it very well and had me on the edge of my chair. Thanks for a good read.
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Review of Back in the Day  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a wonderful poem, I loved it.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I don't write poetry so do not review the mechanics. I love trees and I love this poem and that it gives credit to our Creator.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this poem, it makes me smile I like flowers and rainbows. A question - should there be an 'a' in the next to the last line? I don't write poetry so thought I would ask.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I don't normally review poetry because I don't write poetry and don't know the mechanics of it. I don't know this form of poetry but I realized what you were doing and that is a first for me. I liked the poem and it made me feel a little chilly!
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Review of I will Help You  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a sweet story. I like that Susan is willing to help this child. Well written.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Complex Numbers  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I have appreciated all the feedback I have had over the years too.
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419
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a sweet story but a very real possibility. I like the way it was written.

Dianne
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420
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem it made me hungry!
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Review of Harvest Ball  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I don't write poetry, I read the definition below the poem but do not understand it. I don't critique poetry I just tell you I like it and wish it were fall now!
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422
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I read thru some of the other posts and just cleared the browser. I will try this. Thank you for the help.
Dianne
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Review of Misled  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I don't write poetry so do not try to critique it, other than to say I like it and I think it flows and I understood it.😊

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like the story so far. There are some word choices that you should consider changing. I think when you do a complete edit you will find them. I think you have done a very good job on this story and would like to continue reading as you get the chapters ready.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ok, I knew something devious was behind this virus! Wonder how many superspreaders are out there running around? I like this story and I think you wrote it well.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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