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Review of Lifeless  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem makes you feel the writer's sorrow and depression. I could see the beach and the waves in my mind and feel the pain of depression.

Congratulations on the win with this poem.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is interesting and I enjoyed reading it. Now I want to know more. Is there more? I like Kenna, she is strong and sure of herself.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Thank you. I really like them. How can i get the Beatles merit badge??
Dianne
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Review of Dreamer  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's good to keep our dreams alive. I like this poem.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem. I feel the same sometimes and I would love to fly like the birds!

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Lucian Ravor  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sounds like a teenager, but could make a strong character.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like your story. It is a little sad, but kids grow up. It reminds me of when mine left home. It was bittersweet.
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Review of The Gift  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great poem! It brings a tear to my eye and warms my heart. Thank you for sharing.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this poem, it tells of God's love and why He died for us. I like reading poetry that I understand.
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Review of The End  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a good story. I like the way you wrote it. The ending is different and definitely on the creepy side. I like the end of the world stories. I watch a lot of those on TV.

I wish you well here on WDC; it's a good place to be.

Dianne
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Review of Pen and Ink  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I've only been texting 6 or so years now. I still use good grammar (I hope). I don't understand most of the abbreviation used. I do use emojis if I find one that goes with my text.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Can't wait for the rest!!
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I enjoyed this very much, it is moving and I agree with you. I am so glad Jesus loved us enough to die for us! Where would we be without Him?

Keep Writing
God Bless
Dianne
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Review of Rainbow Sparklers  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This sounds like a very interesting creature. I thought it sounded like a fire-fly, to begin with, but this one is more interesting.

Keep Writing
God Bless
Dianne
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Review of My Dream Job  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It sounds like being a travel writer would be a lot of fun!

Keep Writing
God Bless
Dianne
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Review of Patterns  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was funny and I enjoyed it.
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Review of Caveat Emptor  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought this was really good. Enjoyed reading it.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Visitors  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like this story and I think you wrote it well. I like how the Crystals tried to help and it sad the help was not accepted.

Keep Writing
God Bless
Dianne
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Review of Little Chubby  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a good story if a little sad. Poor Little Chubby, I feel sorry for him. I have an artificial tree, it doesn't die but will wear out in time.

Good Work Keep Writing
God Bless
Dianne
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Review of Savior our Lord  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem, what it says, how it says it, everything about it.

Keep Writing and God Bless
Dianne
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Review of Enticement  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the poem but I did not understand the last sentence.

God Bless
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A lovely poem of thanksgiving.

God Bless
Dianne
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Review of Facebook Photos  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story. I feel for the teacher. Makes you realize once it's on the internet it is never gone.
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Review of Greeting the Ex-  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A lot said in 100 words. Very good.

God Bless
Dianne
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I loved this story! I love fairy tales.

God Bless
Dianne
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