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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Wow, that was a nice eulogy. And it sounds like you had a very special grandpa. Thanks for sharing this.
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Review of An Embedded Poll?  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love the site. Good work!
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.5)
I thought this was great --- the clarity, conciseness, rhythm and rhyme. I also enjoyed the substance of the message. I enjoyed reading it.
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very fine work, though a little wordy for my liking. Thank you for sharing this.
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.5)
Check wording here: “Frog-Kissing” is helping people to see themselves in a better light and helping THEM USE THEM USE their improved... (Check the capitalized words.)

I enjoyed your unique Introduction and Terms. You've captured my interest. So, of course, I will review some of your essays.
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Review of My Love  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (3.5)
Short but sweet.
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed this poem. I haven't read many poems of this type and you describe the beauty and wonder with such clarity... Thank you.
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Review of Exegesis  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I really liked this poem --- realism mixed with metaphors. You asked suggestions for "genre." "Philosophy" may be a good fit??
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Review of The Orchid Bride  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I see why you got first place. I found THE ORCHID BRIDE to not only well-written, but captivating and moving. (Tears welled up in my eyes.) I especially liked the way you used the backflash to hold my attention while Fatima digressed to earlier events.
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Review of Can - Can  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked the story line. You held my interest right to the end.

FYI---In the line, they could here the water --- s/b "hear" the water.
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Review of Hope Alive  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nice. You held my interest right up to the end.
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Review of I Fell  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent. This poem draws you right to the end. I enjoyed the rhyme and rhythm as well as its fluidity.
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Review of The Dream  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wonderful story. It very vividly rings true.
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Review of The Wind Dancer  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! I found this to be really well written --- again, I liked the rhythm and rhyme. The poetry almost sings to you.
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice. I liked the rhythm and rhyme of this poem. True story?
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Review of Tree Fairies  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your story was not only very creative but moving as well. It bro't me to the brink of tears.
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