Thank you for sharing. It is better to let go of the pain rather than holding on to it. I won't give a critique of your writing, but I do have some comments. Your narrative is well written. There is a lot of description. The emotion is conveyed in an effective manner. I would encourage you to post some short stories or poems here. I'm sure there would be many people who would read them.
I like this poem very much. The emotion is raw and heart felt. I can feel the reality of it. Your expression of finding the resolution in the 'Savior' is well said.
Thank you for sharing this heart felt account of sadness and joy in life. I'm glad that God showed you the way, and you were willing to take that path.
Consider the Bible: Isaiah 5:8. I find your poem to be an honest expression of what so many of us are asking. But just as it is hard to hit a target in the dark, so it for us to find truth while in the dark.
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