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Review of Laura  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The description and flow of this poem was well developed. I enjoyed the story line, and the spacing makes it easy for my eyes.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Poetry Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Grand Opening!  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Story is well written. The conversations are really easy due to your dialog skills. I found my self taken into the story by the way you were able to describe.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Mystery Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Déjà Vu  
In affiliation with Blogging Circle of Friends  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Horror/Scary Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Heart in Hand  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is well written, and the story line touches me in many ways. I can see the hand clutching the bloody heart in it. I could feel the sorrow that drove the events that occurred.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Horror/Scary Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Treat or Trick?  
In affiliation with The Sisterhood of Mom's  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This stands true to the title. It is one that I would like to see turned into a book possibly a novel. The story is well written, and it invites the reader to stroll in the events of the story.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Horror/Scary Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of An Intruder Calls  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
You have a real talent for dialog. You moved the story along with spoken word. I find that this would be easier for me to read if the font was a little bigger.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Horror/Scary Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Perfect  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I should not do this, but I appauld the ending of your story. I think that every woman should be who she is, but there is always a Frank to try to change her. Frank doesn't have to be a husband or even a boy friend. His spirit lives strong in advertising, television programs, and even in school. The spirit of Frank whispers in our ears that we are not worth love if we don't meet the requirements of "Petfection."

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Horror/Scary Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Fear Comes Home  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I would like to have more. This is a well written story. The characters are introduced, but I am still wanting more of the story. The paragraphs are well formed. I enjoyed the read.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Horror/Scary Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Monsters  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I love this story. I would love it to be longer. I would like to know if she was a muntant, alien, of just a unfortunant misform child. This was a chilling story that kept my attention.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Horror/Scary Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is well written. I can feel the emotions of the characters. The page is formatted well. THe spaces and scene devisions make it easier to read. I could not imagine how it would to not know who you are, but there are so many people that I have met who do.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"For Authors Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was a well told and interesting story. I love the descriptive work in your story. You were able to bring the reader into the story. The characters were were developed, and I felt that I could see the events unfold.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"For Authors Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of A Unicorn is Born  
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I don't know what to say. I love this poem. It is so beautiful. I could see the love between the animals. It shows the bond of mother and child in all creatures. The flow was smooth and the rythem was easy to keep.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"For Authors Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a wonderful way to say thank you. I am going to check out your other link. I have family that has been in the armed forces. Each served in a different brance, but they fought for us.


I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"For Authors Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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464
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
First the picture is beautiful. My family of two sons and my other half all love the dragon. The story is well written. I like that it shows a different side of the animal. I love that he has human emotion. The item is formatted to be attracted to the eye.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Fantasy Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
THis story is one that I enjoyed very much. I like that you left us wanting more. YOu are able to keep the reader's attention by writing in such a way that we feel as hough we are there.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Fantasy Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Magi Quest Shop  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The story is well written. I like the event layout. You introduced your characters well. I think that the third person tense is a good choice.

The only fault (for me) is that you may need to skip a line between paragraphs. This would create a smoother read for my weary eyes.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.


"Fantasy Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of A long sleep  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
First there should be a space between the first sentence and the next paragraph.

I am giving a five star rating. I can relate to the story. My dad lies in a home fighting this battle, and I am afraid because my memory isn't what I think that it should be.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Drama Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of GHOST  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This story was well told. The paragraphs were written so that they were smooth. I love that you have captured the story line in a way that the reader feels that he/she was there watching the events unfold.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Drama Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Darkness  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I was on a emotional trip to a frightening place. This is a story told with great descriptive skills. I was sitting on the edge of my seat wanting to find a way to help her.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Drama Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Five Minutes  
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love the action in this story. The descriptive way you told about death taking the limbs was wonderful. I really feel that I am there as I read it. I found the story line one that I was able to enjoy much like I would a movie.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.


"Drama Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am getting to get back to work. My son is coming home from the hospital, and I was dropped from Charting the seas so I have more time to catch up here. I am so sorry for all the delay. I think that this where I am. IF not, Please let me know.

Thank you for your patiences.
Ida


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I love family trips and visits. There is so much to draw from if you do comedy. I have so much material that I could use in so many different ways: comedies, poetry, short stories, non-fiction, and most of how What Not To DO's. I found this very well written, and put a smile on my face.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Comedy Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Otherwise Engaged  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Beautifully written. THe message is cute. Your descriptive statements brought me into the story watching the events unfold. I know that I wish that my surprises of being wrong was in this direction. Mine are always feeling that love is there, but the emotion is one sided.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Romance/Love Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 

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Ida


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Review of Permeation  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I like this story because it gives us an eye of the other side of the crime. The only thing is that it seems so soothing to go so quietly while those who have done nothing to hurt have to battle the pain of things like cancer. I know that there are some who die on death roll that did nothing that they were acused of.

This was well written, and I enjoyed the different angle of the subject.

I found your item in a news letter that has been sent to me in my email. It was an editor's pick.

"Short Stories Newsletter (February 26, 2013)" 
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Ida


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In affiliation with The Sisterhood of Mom's  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I found that there is such a sad and one of strength. I can hear the fight in the words that you have written. The poem is well written, and the flow kept the lines running smoothly through the poem. I like the encouraging picture of the land after death. This is a tale after my heart.

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Ida


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