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Review of Cliche  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She is alone and trying to adjust to being left behind. Young love seems so magic and then it's over. She is crushed and he has moved on with his dreams. She calls it a nightmare and implies that 'there is a real nightmare' in her body.
Could she be pregnant?
Is that why she is so scared?

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Vietnam Soldier  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


He was the lone survivor after the fighting. He had to keep his head clear enough to signal a chopper to take the dead and wounded back to base. After making his way through the bodies and grabbing extra ammo.
Two flares might work. Then he heard a noise.
He dropped down and pretended to be one of the dead. One remaining enemy soldier walking around.

There they were two enemies on the battle ground of the dead. Looking at their comrades and probably wondering why.

Our character got back home and tells about surviving the fight and doing what was necessary.

Thank you for sharing.
The descriptions are well done.
This war, the jungle fighting.
So many things were working against our guys.
The tunnels, land mines.
We need a piece like this every now and then to help remember the fallen in the h--ll.


Yellow
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Review of The Return  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


He left his ranch a long time ago to see what the world had to offer. He was lonely on the ranch and might have been looking for excitement. Finding plenty of adventures over the years; he comes back to the ranch. His parents are gone and the ranch has become run down. So now he reflects on what to do.
Apparently his brain is a bit foggy and confused.
While looking out the window he sees the fog on the mountains lifting. He can see clearly now. Could this be a sign for him?
Saying goodbye to his life before isn't so hard now because he has so much living to do.

Thank you for sharing.
Liked your descriptions.
Liked the emotional conflict to help the reader understand the character better.



Yellow
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Review of Peace Offering  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
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This was her first turkey. Everything looked perfect for her coming guests. She claimed she was too nervous to eat. Meanwhile the guests were having a grand old time. One neighbor came she argued with before. Her old best friend showed up as well.
People started getting sick and she called for help.

Could it be just my suspicious nature or did she plan this?

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of The basement  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A man is afraid of so many things. Eventually the fear keeps him for doing anything outside his own home. This apparently was his safe sanctuary for the dangers out in the world.
Granted he was alone.
Granted he had a TV.
Apparently he didn't feel safe enough to open his front door which allowed him to starve to death.
So in the end fear of living actually killed him.
So remember if you let fear rule your life, you give up your ability to live.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Girl troubles  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A young man is trying to deal with the ups and downs of his lady. She goes from happy to angry in a split second. From the tone of the piece is sound like the guy is a bit afraid to open his mouth.
He can't understand how she can flip so quickly.
Angry over mundane things.
A friend listens but has no advice.
Even the friend is perplexed with her actions.
The friend wishes the guy luck.
We all know love never runs smoothly but sometimes it doesn't run at all.

A bit of humor felt here.
Some confusion is felt on the part of the guy as well.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Saying Goodbye  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Two friends meet and one has some news. They had been friends for a long time.
The news will change so many things. The distance and time will be hard to deal with for each of them.
Being a part of each others life for so long makes goodbye so very sad.
She tells him she will be gone in a week and it breaks his heart.
He must make this the moment he makes his feelings known.
She had no idea that he loved her but she belongs to another. The last thing he said is he will wait. She knows in her heart he will.

The piece feels so natural.
You captured the emotions well.

Thank you for sharing.



Yellow
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Review of The Award  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


As the piece suggest we are all actors. The stage is where those that watch the play can decide whether we are convincing or not. If you start out lying to yourself; playing the part just won't be right.
So our character has played long enough. No love and no way to keep up the act. The play is ending and she exits.
Going through the motions of total love and devotion, must be played by those who really feel that way.
Otherwise, Broadway is out of the question and so isn't the future.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of The Swarm  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Good job with this. The descriptions appeared to be something bad moving. Tears, falling and yelling could lead one to believe it might be a scene from a battle.
Boy did you get me good!
Never would have thought the ending would be what it was.

Tricky tricky author indeed.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Lilly's Poem  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is a sweet piece about a little girl who is loved. The description of her eyes and talking about her as a princess brings back so many memories of my daughter.
She may have a tiny little heart but her love for her mom is bigger than the a mountain.
As they grow, we moms, still look at them and see those little angel eyes that opened for the first time and said I love you.
Every day, there after those eyes will wrap around her heart and not let go.

Thank you for sharing and bringing back some special memories.


Yellow
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Review of Love me some me  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


After a break up, it is easy to think that you are a real looser. Also, you might think, why would any one love you again?
This piece gives us a wake up call.
That person left but you are still you. They choose to leave you. There are good things about you and don't let it get you to far down. After all, who left and who is missing out.
Who knows some talk might have saved things but the other person wasn't willing to invest the time. So who is the real winner here?
Pick yourself up, dust yourself off, start all over again. They are out there waiting for someone like you. Don't be down on yourself.
Think about it and realize it just might have been for the best.


Yellow
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Review of Special Time  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Sure we all get down now and then. If you really think about it, we should feel blessed to see another year.
As this piece suggests; time has come and gone at a rapid pace. Still he holds a smile on his face.
If we all wear that same attitude as a cloak. Nothing would get us down.
So thank God for one more year to love and be love. Thank Him for the birds that bring us their special melody.
The seasons each holding its own magic and how blessed we are to be a child of God.
LOVE THE PICTURE. BEAUTIFUL

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of News  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


We have some curious boys looking for a way to make a buck.
We have a sheriff with the intention to keep an eye on those boys.
We have a deputy hesitating to investigate a strange finding.
People gather around the river to see what's going on.
Then a man is suddenly moving out of town.
His wife's whereabouts is a mystery.
Most of all we have the blessing of heavy rains. The rains came and cleared up so much

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Monster  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The author brings us a piece to ponder this beautiful day.
Unfortunately man and his conduct has brought about evil in thoughts and actions.

Throughout history, with wars and religious differences, man has found little reason to live peacefully.
This monster, man created, has been having a field day. Watching and waiting for us to destroy our world and ourselves.
The more we conform to his will, the digger we dig ourselves nearer to the pit.

Thank you for sharing.



Yellow
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Review of Your Storm  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Two friends in the same room. One happy and the other sad.
Why does the happy one feel guilty on such a sad day for the other.
What would you do?
Would you talk to the sad person and offer a listening heart. By listening, that won't take your joy away and it might even make you feel better.
Would you just walk off and leave the other person alone in their sadness?

The choices we make says a lot about our characters. Granted by listening you can't change anything but you were there for that sad person. Sometimes being there is worth more than one could know.

After all, wouldn't you want someone to be there for you?

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of random etchings  
for entry "Frog" 
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Two kids are playing outside. The mom decides to check on them after an unusual sound.
One child is missing and the mom finds out the sister worked some magic on him.
Mom is a bit upset.
The little girl fixes things but the little boy changes back again on his own.

I remember that old show 'Bewitched'. When she had her daughter; she had to keep her under control to avoid problems like this.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Bleeding Heart  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


To love someone and know they don't love you is hard to deal with.
All the time and wishing won't result in change.
With so much to offer and no one to give it to; our character feels hopeless.
Perhaps the other person is cold and illusive because of other relations ships that caused pain.
Our character could use this as an excuse for why it can't happen.
Who is the character really kidding?
Dreaming that impossible dream and shedding those invisible tears, are something that must be hidden from view.
If it should ever be a relationship it must be real and not from pity.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of The End  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A woman drives upset at her husband. He tries to reason with her and make her slow down but she doesn't like what he is saying to her.
He is trying to make her stop living in a fantasy. He wants her to except that things have changed and will never be the same again.
The more he talks the angrier she gets. She can't let go.
She won't accept what he is saying or why he is saying it.
He knows she has to start to heal so she can go on.
She is confused.
Soon she is stopped by the cops and brought back to reality.

Ending caught me by surprise. Good job.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She knows he is just playing games with her heart. As a consequence she is depressed about it. She is empty inside and he was to be the one to fill it. As it turns out his words are worth no more than feathers on the breeze.
The more she holds back the anger the more she is about to blow up.
The sad part is she really loved him and he just played the part.
She should walk away but her heart won't let her.
He should walk away but he has it too good right now to leave.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Invisible Tears  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She's looking for love to make this world a better place.
Someone to make her feel safe and to stop the invisible tears.
There must be happiness out there waiting just around the bend.
Love has a way of showing up when we least expect it. That face, those truthful eyes, the inviting smile and the open soul ready to love as well.
Don't give up; keep hope alive.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of What is Love?  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


How many of us have tried to define love.
Here our author reflects on different versions of what it might entail.
Could it be flowers, an arrow, candy, angels singing and rainbows.

When you get down to the nitty gritty these last two lines, pretty well says it all.

To me it's just the way
I feel when you're with me.'

Thank you for sharing this touching piece.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


It only took a 'week' to apologize to her.
As she packed for her trip she listens but kept on packing.
He was feeling a bit insecure with her leaving for two weeks.
He even asked if she was coming back.
He took her to the airport and they parted.
Once he opened the door at home he knew the truth.
Sometimes enough is enough

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Something  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author reminds us how love can change our whole life. Finding that certain someone to make your life complete.
Here we have a woman in love and the reader can feel the excitement in the piece.
The happiness is so apparent.
There are shooting stars to light up the night.
If that doesn't say how wonderful she feels, I don't know what does.

Oh to feel so good, so new, so loved.
What a lucky lady indeed.

Thank you for sharing this touching and happy piece.



Yellow
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Review of The Collector  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a writer. It is the first snow and she collects the right words to express the sights she is seeing. Something so pristine can only be spoken about with purity.
If she were to step outside; she feels she might takes some of the magic away. So she waits until things begin to melt and then ventures out.
Granted all she collected in her mind is so determined to flow like a waterfall; she is in charge of her creativity.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Summer Life  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


In this piece our author reminds us of summer and all of the hours spent having fun with friends.
Of course there is some work like weeding the garden. Once that garden starts producing the work will be so worth it.
Going to the beach and the sandcastles.
We all remember that feeling like the summer might last forever.
Unfortunately it doesn't but there is always next year to start all over again.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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