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Rated: 18+ · Book · Spiritual · #1149750
10k views, 2x BestPoetryCollection. A nothing from nowhere cast words to a world wide wind
#1041857 added December 18, 2022 at 7:13pm
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What's So Perfect?
We would really like to know

If ever I'm perfect
they'll dismantle me
maybe, study me
but mostly, do away with me
We lost paradise once
Tirelessly, must settle for imperfection?

I hand her the correct change
she says perfect
I complete their application
submit, he looks it over
perfect
Making an appointment
I respond to need of contact info
Verbal utterance echoes on the line
perfect

You can't call me back
Unable to process my application
I passed counterfeit bills (coins I can't mint)

You don't know me
I could be the person trying to undo
all that is perfect, "functional"
within the frequencies, communes
of coexistence, governed society,
aiming with just one word —
perfect

Perfect? Do you hear yourself?
What's perfect about correct address?
You've never been here
I could live in squalor
police sirens blaring, cars jacked —
a militarized zone, mortar shells
perfect bullets rip past down my street
as I take the car out again

and it performs as it should
on journey to my next 'perfect'
when I stop (while it rolls independently)
to consider, then pat the fading dash
from my leather-creased, captain's chair
inside a rusty hull, bumper cracked
radio-sometimes-working, beaut of a machine
and say
'you're what's perfect'...

even though, you aren't.

If I don't appreciate all imperfection
and what functions, necessitating a weary life
keeping me going
up this hill we're on
before the six foot drop off
or crusher, then I must admit
between here and where eternity ends
I might make it to perfect...

Envisioning a white cloud
airily lifting me close enough to touch bluest heaven
and no one will see
I'd keep it to myself
between me and the Chevy
We'll both drive off that cliff
before we'll let anyone dissect us.

We are what we are and it ain't perfect

Okay, good, thank you, I have all that I need...
unless there's something more?


12.16.22
62 lines (free verse}

Best Long poem I've written in sometime, if ever.

a little, annoying word on the lips of many little minds, more functional than me.

and you know what else I don't care for? indifference.

3-Time WDC Quill Nominee: Best Poetry Collection...2020-22.

For quill 2021 winners

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