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Author: Charley  [Aug 8, 2022] Genre(s): Comedy :: None :: None Details: I have been a storyteller for decades and want to transition into becoming a writer. This is an attempt to work on the dialog. [Fiction]
Author: lee. [Aug 8, 2022] Genre(s): Emotional :: Self Help :: None Details: I appreciate insight. [Poetry]
Author: Scotty1615 [Jul 31, 2022] Genre(s): Emotional :: Experience :: Drama Details: Please review. [Short Story]
Author: SSpark [Jul 26, 2022] Genre(s): Biographical :: Family :: Other Details: One of the more humorous memories from my childhood. Part of a collections of memories, and all characters have been introduced. Nanny and Pappaw are my grandparents, Belita and Tina my cousins, Dee Dee and Katy my sisters. [Short Story]
Author: VanillaSoftArt  [Jul 25, 2022] Genre(s): Erotica :: Teen :: Fanfiction Details: I gave myself a challenge to write an erotic story under 1.5K words, set in the MLP universe. I'd like to know strengths and weaknesses of this submission for the future. [Fiction]
Author: lezismore-moreislez  [Jul 19, 2022] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Action/Adventure :: Nature Details: Decided to give the Fantasy genre a go. Any feedback would be most appreciated. Thanks [Serial]
Author: Vixey Todd [Jul 18, 2022] Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Erotica :: Adult Details: Please provide constructive feedback. [Novel]
Author: Joto-Kai [Jul 18, 2022] Genre(s): Spiritual :: Hobby/Craft :: Inspirational Details: In this short (298 words currently) Melvin nearly misses the point of his trip to the beach. Will a misfired goal and a foolish purchase derail his weekend or set him off to become what he wishes? Also: should I change to 3PL from 1st? Query for GPs [Short Story]
Author: PureSciFiPlus  [Jul 16, 2022] Genre(s): Teen :: Family :: Drama Details: Just finished creating my Short Story about a girl named Grace who is about to turn sixteen. And she wants to get her driver’s license when she turns sixteen. She only has one very, very big problem in doing that: her father. [Short Story]
Author: Daisan [Jul 10, 2022] Genre(s): Cultural :: Crime/Gangster :: Other Details: Piece I'm working on that's part of a larger story. Of course I'm interested in technical things like formatting but I'm more interested in if the story is communicated effectively in the way it's told and if the tone (which is humor) is achieved. [Fiction]
Author: AliceLvs2Write [Jul 8, 2022] Genre(s): Friendship :: Mystery :: Women's Details: First time writing off a WDC writing prompt and would love some feedback on it. Thank you. [Fiction]
Author: Avid Novel Reader  [Jul 5, 2022] Genre(s): Relationship :: Crime/Gangster :: Action/Adventure Details: I've just written a short story for this month's official contest. I'd love any feedback you can offer so that I can improve it before the deadline at the end of July. Any help is much appreciated. Thank you! :) [Short Story]
Author: ruwth  [Jul 4, 2022] Genre(s): Personal :: Experience :: Biographical Details: Earn 1000 gift points from an auto-award item from my port. You can write a critique, offer a comment, anything you want. Simply read and write a response of some kind in the review box and earn your gift points.[Other]
Author: Kris [Jul 4, 2022] Genre(s): Arts :: Dark :: Emotional Details: This is a short story I’ve been working on. I’m happy with how it’s turning out, but would really appreciate an honest review. I know it lacks many things. [Short Story]
Author: ~SilverMoon~🌌 [Jul 3, 2022] Genre(s): Other :: Other :: Other Details: I'd like some reviews on this item please. Any suggestions are welcome. [Poetry]
Author: Mark Diaz [Jun 21, 2022] Genre(s): Romance/Love :: None :: None Details: A poem about Fire Hair Girl [Poetry]
Author: SSpark [Jun 14, 2022] Genre(s): Psychology :: Family :: Emotional Details: This piece is heavily weighted in symbolism. I'm anxious to find out how hard it is to find and understand those symbols. All honest reviews gratefully accepted. [Non-fiction]
Author: ponkacheese [Jun 14, 2022] Genre(s): Writing :: Medical :: Environment Details: Enjoy and let me know what you think. =) [Poetry]
Author: green [Jun 10, 2022] Genre(s): Biographical :: Opinion :: Experience Details: Hey, everyone,My weakness are the grammatical errors. My words flow but my punctuation stinks. I, probably, need help with all my pieces but we'll start with this one. Please be exact. Thank you so much, Stephanie [Other]
Author: MWse [Jun 8, 2022] Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Fantasy :: Other Details: Hello, I'm looking for good criticism from all perspectives. The story is new so I can make adjustments If I know what to change. Thank you! [Novel]
Author: MysteryBox [Jun 4, 2022] Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Thriller/Suspense :: Paranormal Details: Newest short story. hitchhiking horror with a plot twist! [Fiction]
Author: Talia Foxtail [May 30, 2022] Genre(s): Biographical :: Other :: Other Details: I am looking mostly for storytelling and flow. Its non fiction so I can't add much, but I can edit out if it doesn't work. [Chapter]
Author: Leslie Loo [May 21, 2022] Genre(s): Animal :: Children's :: Contest Entry Details: This is a story that I wrote six years ago. Check it out and let me know what you think. Also, tell me how I can improve the ending because to me, I'm not currently satisfied with it. Thanks! [Fiction]
Author: D-Angel222 [May 19, 2022] Genre(s): Comedy :: Dark :: Entertainment Details: Hello, perfectly good stranger reading this.Click here and see if I can make you laugh. Go on, what have you got to lose? Time? Patience? Sanity!? Ok, they're all good reasons, but c'mon take a gamble on a newbie, please :) [Monologue]
Author: Cat Carroll  [May 12, 2022] Genre(s): Dark :: Supernatural :: Gothic Details: Hello! Please let me know if this works well or is too "fan-like" of Edgar Allan Poe's works. I chose to give those two well-known poems (The Raven & Annabel Lee) twists of my own along with my interpretation in a new poem. Thanks, dears! [Poetry]
Author: Tileira [May 10, 2022] Genre(s): Paranormal :: Romance/Love :: Supernatural Details: Looking for feedback on this to help me strengthen the development of the romantic connection and characterization and information the next part [Short Story]
Author: Flower [May 5, 2022] Genre(s): Relationship :: Romance/Love :: Dark Details: This is my second poem, its about a toxic relationship, I'd love for some feedback, if possible. [Poetry]
Author: Daffodil Washburn [May 4, 2022] Genre(s): Paranormal :: Thriller/Suspense :: Action/Adventure Details: Hello! I'd appreciate any feedback you have to give me!(It's still a work in progress so if you have any helpful plot tips I would be beyond grateful!) :) [Fiction]
Author: Sand Castles Shopgirl 739  [Apr 23, 2022] Genre(s): Mystery :: History :: Other Details: Originally thought to be a preface, but am now torn between preface or chapter. This side story arose from a character sketch. The "parting gift" became a short story on its own. Not sure how to proceed here. Suggestions, please!! [Fiction]
Author: Perhaps [Apr 18, 2022] Genre(s): Relationship :: Psychology :: Philosophy Details: Please review. Gift points will be 5000 each review [Poetry]
Author: Perhaps [Apr 18, 2022] Genre(s): Community :: Cultural :: History Details: Please review. Gift points will be 5000 each review [Poetry]
Author: Cat Carroll [Apr 15, 2022] Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Dark :: Supernatural Details: Hello! This is my first attempt at prose poetry, a genre I adore. It's a horror/supernatural poem about creation, monsters, and something from within that engulfs us... Please let me know about its strengths and weaknesses :). Thanks! [Poetry]
Author: Larisa McGrath [Apr 15, 2022] Genre(s): Teen :: Young Adult :: Women's Details: If this first chapter is not a good hook, what can I do to change that? What would inspire you all to keep reading? What do you expect to see in a solid first chapter? I feel like something is missing, but cannot put my finger on what. Please help. [Draft]
Author: jonnigrl1 [Apr 7, 2022] Genre(s): Contest :: Dark :: Entertainment Details: An honest review would be very much appreciated. Thank you! [Fiction]
Author: Nine [Apr 6, 2022] Genre(s): Inspirational :: Romance/Love :: Writing.Com Details: This is something close to my heart since it was written for my favorite person who inspires me. Please review this work and help me learn and make it more beautiful with your suggestons. [Poetry]
Author: Benjamin Black [Apr 5, 2022] Genre(s): Paranormal :: Horror/Scary :: Ghost Details: Honest feedback, editing errors, grammar etc needed. Don't be afraid to hurt my feelings. [Short Story]
Author: Joto-Kai [Apr 4, 2022] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Other :: Other Details: Can Voltaire protect Elisha if she is determined to face their deadly one-time student that is corrupting the world about him?[Prose]
Author: John [Mar 31, 2022] Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Entertainment :: Fantasy Details: I would like feedback on my first chapter. It is short but contains all the information the reader needs regarding the back story of the superpowers.Thank you for taking your time and reading. [Draft]
Author: Laura Ellen Carr  [Mar 31, 2022] Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Mystery :: Other Details: Please review the first chapter of my book please, I need to know if I am on the right path. Please give me your honest opinion. [Novel]
Author: Sand Castles Shopgirl 739 [Mar 30, 2022] Genre(s): Nature :: Experience :: Environment Details: Our local library is running a poetry contest to celebrate Poetry Month in April. Rules included line limitation, nothing vulgar or profane. The main request is, the writing should appeal to everyone, no matter the age. [Poetry]
Author: BIG BAD WOLF  [Mar 28, 2022] Genre(s): Writing :: Fantasy :: Other Details: My new addition, Advice of a Werewolf could use some reviews. Warning - content is of a nature that could offend some people. That being said, other additions could use reviews. [Handbook]
Author: RickyZ [Mar 28, 2022] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Sci-fi :: War Details: The epoch continues, and the Royal king approaches. Any and all feedback and suggestions are greatly appreciated. Particularly interesting in character representation and believability. Thank you for your consideration, and enjoy. [Chapter]
Author: 🤍RookieTea🤍  [Mar 23, 2022] Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Teen :: Drama Details: I want straight forward reviews. I don't care so much for fluff, though I do like praise were earned. Thank you! [Novel]
Author: PureSciFi  [Mar 23, 2022] Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Action/Adventure :: Drama Details: I don’t think that I have made any mistakes in this Science Faction Short Story. But I wouldn’t be surprised if I did. Especially, when it comes to my tenses. Knowing about them would help me a lot. [Short Story]
Author: Clare Kennedy [Mar 20, 2022] Genre(s): Mythology :: Fantasy :: Action/Adventure Details: After some really helpful feedback, I've made some significant adjustments to my first chapter. It is the start of a fantasy saga and whilst inspired by Norse mythology, the world and everything within it, is entirely my own work. [Fiction]
Author: PureSciFiPlus [Mar 16, 2022] Genre(s): Western :: Action/Adventure :: Drama Details: I’m not very good when it comes to Westerns. I like Westerns a whole lot. Especially, Televisions and Movies. But I prefer lasers and spaceships to bows and arrows aka cowboys and Indians. [Short Story]
Author: Ruthie4u [Feb 27, 2022] Genre(s): Family :: Experience :: Parenting Details: Appreciate your feedback on the story and it's progression. I'd like to know if it's readable, understandable and interesting. Thank you. [Fiction]
Author: Ruthie4u [Feb 27, 2022] Genre(s): Family :: Parenting :: Relationship Details: Appreciate if you could let me know, how the story flows and the ways things are worded or described needs to be worked on. Thank you. [Fiction]
Author: RickyZ [Feb 25, 2022] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Sci-fi :: War Details: A beginning to an epic. We all must start somewhere. Requesting any and all reviews and feedback! Thank you all in advance! [Chapter]
Author: Daisan [Feb 25, 2022] Genre(s): Crime/Gangster :: Drama :: Other Details: First draft of a segment I'm working into story as part of a two-three chapter arc in the narrative. Critiques/recommendations (provided they're constructive). Working on subtle movement and dialogue to push narrative. [Fiction]
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