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 |   Exploring the future through the present. One day at a time. |
| A few weeks ago I posted a question about how one gets through harsh criticism. Afterward, I decided to back away for a few days before I studied the comments with a more objective eye. Once I did, I decided to apply their critiques (the consistent ones, anyway), mostly to see how they would affect my novel. I ended up with an entirely new prologue and changed the point of view character in the first chapter. I think it’s much better. I’m glad I let go of my pride and decided to look at my story through the critiquers’ eyes instead of my own. It was hard, but hopefully worth it in the end. Time will tell. And if you're interested, you can read the prologue and first three chapters here: "Born of Fire"  |
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