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#1010980 added May 29, 2021 at 9:27pm
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Poem Re-edited With New Eyes
Since I can see what poems are getting attention, I can also revisit and re-edit to see if I can polish the rough gems. Here's what I did with one that I wasn't particularly fond of, but have a new appreciation for:

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I know the sentimentality is forced, but I think it serves me and many readers who contemplate fare like this.

Another poem freshly re-edited after quite a few years. Points to anyone who can guess the image adorning the link:

 
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Flavor For The Feast  (E)
Obsession with preparing a feast and good conversation can spoil a good time.
#1165197 by Brian K CanTry
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