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Walkin' in Memphis

Today is day 7 of my 11 day road trip. I am still in Memphis but I leave for New York on Tuesday. Home to California on Thursday night.

I am tired but seem to be getting my second wind now that I can see the end is in site.

I am reworking my book. For anyone that has read it, I am doing the following:

1. The military will have a smaller role, not quite so omnipotent.
2. There will be headlines at the start of each chapter showing the decay of the world order.
3. The artifact will be smaller
4. The artifact base will not be underground
5. Jack and the Sheriff will be taken away for an interview and returned later that night.
6. The burn team will be minimized while Lise and Alice are bigger

There are several plot lines in this story. Each chapter will cover 2 or 3 plot lines.

JD11 will have a progressively bigger role as the story moves along.

I do not intend to rewrite the entire story thus far but I am going to rework each Chapter.

My intent is to get this thing back on track. I am going to sign up for the San Francisco Writers Conference next February and I want this to be done by then.

J