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character development

I wrote a story yesterday called "Fearless". I received a critique that said even though it was flash fiction (300 word limit) I could have done more to develop the characters. I knew when I read it he was right.

So today, I tred to write one where I cared about the character. It is called "Lost Tears Found". After I posted it, I read it and cried. At least it worked for me.

I love to write.

Jim