The Poetic Musings of Dawn

merl's form

Lemons

Tart little ray of sunshine found in fruit.

Sweet lips soft to touch
sour treat, acute in taste, creates much pleasure deep within.

Bundle of light liquified into juice,
life's bitter candy.

Natural produce, not quite a brandy until fermented.




Thanks Merl!
"the syllables are:

10

5
15

10
5

15

and I guess I want those syllables or words in those syllable spots to rhyme.
It might be really hard to do.

Thanks


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