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10/3 Outline Revision and Timeline
Theanna is self-conscience, can't get ahead because at most confrontation she backs down. won't fight for what she thinks is good. Idea, design or herself

Point A-Thea inherits a house and an unusual painting that effects each viewer She must learn to stand up for herself
1) relative who come to sponge off her
2) Quinton Grady- Art Dealer
3) Church-Priests
4) Gang members
5) Boss

Point B Middle
1) relatives leave but not far and try to give her a bad name
2) Quinton-Contacts NY galleries with teasers to see if there is interest he can use for himself- Gets into trouble as many dealers start arriving or bombarding him with questions- send investigators to check him out. Quinton has to tell Thea what he's done. She is disappointed in him and cuts him off for a time.
3) Bishop tries to get law to conficate the painting as historical art that must be given to the church. Hoards of people line the sidewalks thinking the painting will heal their sick. Police want her to give the painting to the church.
4) Eddie has tried to steal it but he and Dave Oliva are put in jail. They are released and Eddie tries to get in with Talia. Finally David and Eddie see the painting- each are affected differently. David sees he dies- Decides he needs to change and get out of the gang but doesn't know how, A cop who sees the painting befriends David,
5) Boss has always respected Theanne but workplace romances never work he almost lost his company over one and refuses to have another. When Thea gets in trouble and her work suffers he tries to counsel her. He has to chose if he will recue and support her or turn his back on her and save his busineess (fire her)

Point C End
1) relatives are ousted and leave empty handed when her lawyer gives them restraining orders and runs their bills up with their lawyers. He is has taken over the old lawyer's office and has seen the painting. Doesn't want to be a sleazey lawyer.
2) Quinton is given the painting for a 3 day private showing for the big whigs in NY and around the world. He gets bought out by an lg gallery owner and offered a partnership
3) Preists are found out- Archibishop is sent for and renouneces Father Jonathan and his bishop- A clean-up of the discies and the Archbishop sees painting and talks to Theanne- he leaves disappointed but without recourse.
4) Eddie sees this change in David- they argue and Eddie kills David leaving his body by the Cathedral and calls 911 to report it- Eddie is now gang leader Conlin and Talia confront him but tho he admits he knows about the death they have nothing on him. He agrees to leave Thea and them alone. Stays on the West side
5) boss makes choice to fight for Thea
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