#803605 added January 20, 2014 at 2:24am Restrictions: None
Full moon's stuff again.
Yes, it is full moon again.
Let us blame this blog on the moon, or whatever force drives one to go down this path.
Writer's advice from other authors is something I take with a pinch of salt.
Let me put my case on the table:
I have bad habits, this I have already stated in many ways.
One is talking an awful lot.
Now imagine the following scene and decide which one suits the moment the best.
"Wow. "
"Holy ..."
"It was an itsy, bitsy, teenie, weenie, yellow polka-dot bikini
That she wore for the first time today ... "
"Tall and tan and young and lovely
the girl from Ipanema goes walking
and when she passes
each one she passes
goes ahhh
When she walks she's like a samba
that swings so cool and sways so gently
that when she passes each one she passes goes ahhh"
Adverbs and adjectives are there for a reason - use them wisely
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