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Rated: 18+ · Book · Writing · #840656
It's my line and I'm editing it.
gifted to me.


Here you'll find sentences, paragraphs, character descriptions some of which have been edited out of previously worked on pieces. Some are just waiting for the 'write' story to come along.

In other words...ALL of these entries are Works in Progress.
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September 19, 2005 at 9:50pm
September 19, 2005 at 9:50pm
#374057
Damn! The Falcons just lost. To Seatle. I don’t think any of them ate their Wheaties this morning. Well, ok. So its more than a wheaties problem. And now, Michael Vick has a bit of a hamstring thing…
September 18, 2005 at 4:02pm
September 18, 2005 at 4:02pm
#373735
I will not pull out the knife
Nor will I cut my skin
I will chase away those thoughts
Not let depression win

I will cuddle with creativity
Type the words of my soul
Swim in the success of others
Let writing make me whole


but then, there are these words:
It’s all a joke, a big façade, a jacket I slip my arms into when reality strikes me cold, rendering me useless. I zip up my hoodie tight. Snuggling in its warmth. Don’t I look good?
September 15, 2005 at 10:20pm
September 15, 2005 at 10:20pm
#373168
Struck by a momentary wave of depression, I am writing my way through it.

Stepping over th corpses, I tip toe

And thn, struck by flashes of joyfulness

I grab your wrist and dance

Waves of depression slap my soul as I step over rotting corpses.
Stench overtakes my nostrils

Nausea floods my hope, dreams, fantasies



Shut your silly stupid trap and hand me the hammer.
September 12, 2005 at 9:19am
September 12, 2005 at 9:19am
#372366
Fascinated by your poetry
Its soft descriptive imagery
Expressions stated lovingly
I squint my eyes and I can see
standing in a desperate plea
My soul who truly wants to be
The object of your destiny.
September 9, 2005 at 12:06pm
September 9, 2005 at 12:06pm
#371805
I came by to see you today.
You had already gone
Nothing left but skin and bones
Crumpled under sterilized white sheets
Tubes connecting you to this earth.

For reasons unexplained,
Death is not quite ready for you
Are you fighting it?
Scared and in pain?
Grasping to cling to the last moments of your life.
September 8, 2005 at 3:05pm
September 8, 2005 at 3:05pm
#371577
Lost

Encased in the choices I’ve made
Unable to move
Flinch a single muscle
Painful, frustrating, yet comforting

Mournful, tearful, cheeks wet

The thick white plaster covering my body is heavy.
Weighing down my heart, my mind, my spirit.
My lungs work hard to breathe

More than a blunder or oversight – a blatant uncaring error.
Born of selfishness


Yet a necessary gift. Opportunity.

Confused and torn by such an oxymoronic twist of events.
Aren’t my battle scars pretty?
Ugly
Torn and bleeding.
August 31, 2005 at 9:21am
August 31, 2005 at 9:21am
#369840
having a teenage daughter really keeps me up to date on slang. 'the world' is something she says often. so, i emailed a parent of a teenager, thanking him for a favor he had done for me. However, the entire favor has yet to be completely accomplished, so, i said..."I guess i don't owe you the world....just one hemisphere."
August 23, 2005 at 10:01am
August 23, 2005 at 10:01am
#368218
Interrupted
Frustrated again
Thoughts clawing against
my battered bleeding soul.
Splattered images entangled in swirls of confusion.
Only to be deciphered by imaginative souls possessing a love for artistic insanity.


June 19, 2005 at 12:43pm
June 19, 2005 at 12:43pm
#354530
Your words sadden me. Especially the last line and the use of 'happily ever after' a concept held dear for a much longer time than Santa Claus or the tooth fairy. It's nonexistent realization often hurts and produces - even if for a moment immobility.
April 13, 2005 at 12:51pm
April 13, 2005 at 12:51pm
#341023


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ASIN: B0002Y4T92
Amazon's Price: $ 23.04

 Pets At Work  (E)
Would you bring your pet to work?
#882165 by NanoWriMo2018 Into the Earth
January 17, 2005 at 4:44pm
January 17, 2005 at 4:44pm
#323125
I'm still struggleing with this as I can't decide where I'm going with this. I jotted down my ideas earlier in anohter journal. But this is where I plan on putting descriptions of enviroment. i.e rooms, towns, parks, stuff like that.

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ASIN: B0000521VS
Amazon's Price: $ 14.36


 Do You Keep a Journal or Blog?  (E)
Which gender journals or blogs more?
#928039 by NanoWriMo2018 Into the Earth
January 17, 2005 at 4:42pm
January 17, 2005 at 4:42pm
#323124
For the new book I'm writing.

I'm jotting things down here, and will update as needed
i.e, their specs. For now, I'm getting them down.

Male Characters
Davis
Dalton
Steve
Malone

Female Characters
Maggie
Christina
Kim
Aubrey
Dakota

this is an addition
Bradley
Sue
Dalton Loner draws and takes pictures
Katie 15 popular teenage girl
Skyler. 12-year-old Harry Potter nut,


William
Maggie
Juliana 14
15 year old Juliana’s best friend.???
Malone Maggie’s brother spending summer w/ them because he’s getting a divorce from ??

 Quality Time  (E)
Would you give up a day's pay?
#883255 by NanoWriMo2018 Into the Earth
December 13, 2004 at 10:01am
December 13, 2004 at 10:01am
#317843
Unfortunately, restoration of lustful activities meant the people were preoccupied, and weren’t prepared for invasion of their city by the Stated/State who claimed they were making medications of mass ‘preoccupation’

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ASIN: 188003235X
Amazon's Price: $ 16.44

ASIN: B0000521VS
Amazon's Price: $ 14.36


 Pets At Work  (E)
Would you bring your pet to work?
#882165 by NanoWriMo2018 Into the Earth
December 6, 2004 at 3:11pm
December 6, 2004 at 3:11pm
#316868
An In and Out entry I posted, I like the sound of it...Fortunately, for the townsfolk of Whoville, the Grinch’s alliance w/ Santa, meant they could celebrate X-Mas in the traditional way; meaningless commercialism, excessive feasting, and greedy materialism. Cindy Lou Who was happy


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ASIN: 188003235X
Amazon's Price: $ 16.44

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Amazon's Price: $ 14.36


 Caffeine  (13+)
How do you take your caffeine
#880555 by NanoWriMo2018 Into the Earth
April 19, 2004 at 11:05am
April 19, 2004 at 11:05am
#286952
Especially since the store aisles offer candy canes and chocolate Santa Clauses long before we have even thought about our Halloween costumes.

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