It's my line and I'm editing it. |
Here you'll find sentences, paragraphs, character descriptions some of which have been edited out of previously worked on pieces. Some are just waiting for the 'write' story to come along. In other words...ALL of these entries are Works in Progress. |
Damn! The Falcons just lost. To Seatle. I don’t think any of them ate their Wheaties this morning. Well, ok. So its more than a wheaties problem. And now, Michael Vick has a bit of a hamstring thing… |
I will not pull out the knife Nor will I cut my skin I will chase away those thoughts Not let depression win I will cuddle with creativity Type the words of my soul Swim in the success of others Let writing make me whole but then, there are these words: It’s all a joke, a big façade, a jacket I slip my arms into when reality strikes me cold, rendering me useless. I zip up my hoodie tight. Snuggling in its warmth. Don’t I look good? |
Struck by a momentary wave of depression, I am writing my way through it. Stepping over th corpses, I tip toe And thn, struck by flashes of joyfulness I grab your wrist and dance Waves of depression slap my soul as I step over rotting corpses. Stench overtakes my nostrils Nausea floods my hope, dreams, fantasies Shut your silly stupid trap and hand me the hammer. |
Fascinated by your poetry Its soft descriptive imagery Expressions stated lovingly I squint my eyes and I can see standing in a desperate plea My soul who truly wants to be The object of your destiny. |
I came by to see you today. You had already gone Nothing left but skin and bones Crumpled under sterilized white sheets Tubes connecting you to this earth. For reasons unexplained, Death is not quite ready for you Are you fighting it? Scared and in pain? Grasping to cling to the last moments of your life. |
Lost Encased in the choices I’ve made Unable to move Flinch a single muscle Painful, frustrating, yet comforting Mournful, tearful, cheeks wet The thick white plaster covering my body is heavy. Weighing down my heart, my mind, my spirit. My lungs work hard to breathe More than a blunder or oversight – a blatant uncaring error. Born of selfishness Yet a necessary gift. Opportunity. Confused and torn by such an oxymoronic twist of events. Aren’t my battle scars pretty? Ugly Torn and bleeding. |
having a teenage daughter really keeps me up to date on slang. 'the world' is something she says often. so, i emailed a parent of a teenager, thanking him for a favor he had done for me. However, the entire favor has yet to be completely accomplished, so, i said..."I guess i don't owe you the world....just one hemisphere." |
Your words sadden me. Especially the last line and the use of 'happily ever after' a concept held dear for a much longer time than Santa Claus or the tooth fairy. It's nonexistent realization often hurts and produces - even if for a moment immobility. |
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For the new book I'm writing. I'm jotting things down here, and will update as needed i.e, their specs. For now, I'm getting them down. Male Characters Davis Dalton Steve Malone Female Characters Maggie Christina Kim Aubrey Dakota this is an addition Bradley Sue Dalton Loner draws and takes pictures Katie 15 popular teenage girl Skyler. 12-year-old Harry Potter nut, William Maggie Juliana 14 15 year old Juliana’s best friend.??? Malone Maggie’s brother spending summer w/ them because he’s getting a divorce from ??
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An In and Out entry I posted, I like the sound of it...Fortunately, for the townsfolk of Whoville, the Grinch’s alliance w/ Santa, meant they could celebrate X-Mas in the traditional way; meaningless commercialism, excessive feasting, and greedy materialism. Cindy Lou Who was happy "Invalid Item" "You Want to Write About WHAT?"
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Especially since the store aisles offer candy canes and chocolate Santa Clauses long before we have even thought about our Halloween costumes. |