Mousie's review forum

Hi I'm new to this website and I just posted five of my poems in my portfolio. Do you think you can review them? Here are the five poems that i could fit into my new members page:
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I really would like a professional review because everyone says they like them a lot but don't tell me how to make them even better! Anyway, if you can, could you please also read my other poems that i've posted in my msn space? Here is a link to that page:
www.spaces.msn.com/members/eternalmelody/
I also have some of my art work on that page so feel free to check that out too!
Thanks!
Elaine (Eternal Melody)
ps:I hope you don't mind me asking you to read so much of my stuff! They are all about the same person and feeling. If you don't want to read everything and review everything thats ok too!