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Sep 4, 2005 at 2:04am
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My first two chapters!
by RwLe27
These are the first two chapters of a project I'm working on. You really don't have to review the first one, it's just there so you know what's going on. I would appreciate anything helpful! Thanks :)

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My first two chapters! · 09-04-05 2:04am
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