I wrote the first chapter of a new novel I'm working on called: "Kelly's Captive." It's about a man in the year 2006 being frozen by a mad scientist, and being unfrozen in the year 2153. The age he is resuscitated in is a time when shrink-ray guns are available to average, every day people. Suffice it to say, he ends up shrunk by a beautiful 14-year-old girl named Kelly, and so becomes Kelly's captive.
I hope everyone enjoys this. Please give me feedback, because I think I did a great job on it, but if you disagree, I'm very interested in knowing your reasons.
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