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Concept/free verse/




Realizing blindness,
opens your eyes in the darkness.
Lurk amongst the shadows,
embrace stillness.
Pride lies in the heart of disgrace,
swap space,
retrace,
until you find your place.
Enter alternate mind stase,
to a soundless humming grace.
Relinquish awkwardness in tune and tone,
to a state of finesse.
Jeopardize the best moment,
so your weakest one flourishes.
The scale shall tip,
when other end fills its insides of stimulants.
Concoctions which only benefit thee,
spread their own wings to be set free.
Greed doesn’t feed,
only offers the seed,
that grows to breed.
Rewards help thee to stay alive,
but die under the tide.
Accomplishments cannot lie,
sooner or later they will defy.
For if they're truly true,
they will fly,
only contained,
Until the riches rain,
then your umbrella no longer can sustain.
But all was not in vain,
for I have truly gained.
I have foresaw, prepared, analyzed and dared.
To plummet without sight, see how I have fared.
To die without care,
is to live without knowing despair.
Abhorrence always has more to share...





A man's ignorance is realized in stride with brilliance
Only then will it never extinguish.......