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May 20, 2006 at 2:13pm
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Edited: May 20, 2006 at 2:15pm
Bits of Prophesy
by Andante
HEY GUYS, I WENT THROUGH THE STORY SO FAR, AND GRABBED ALL THE BITS OF PROPHESY THAT APPEAR, AND MADE A LITTLE BIT OF AN ATTEMPT TO MAKE ORDER OUT OF IT BASED ON WHAT WE'VE DONE ALREADY HERE IN THE FORUM AND IN THE STORY.

"Blue Midget who Hides; The Dwarf in the Darkness; One-Eye marked by Evil's Hand; A Priest of Destiny's Lost; Mad Hunter traveling the Forgotten Way; Lover in Disguise, alone; And the Dreamer of Fortune: Take these with thee, no more, no less"

DMITRI--- "One Eye Marked By Evil’s Hand"
"when silver bells sing while blue bells grow
and if you should fall, remember you almost had it all"

KIERA---"Blue Midget"
"and if you should fall, remember you almost had it all
death's wind shall blow once more when spring comes upon the land
and then the unity will break"

ANGLIS---"Mad Hunter Traveling The Forgotten Way"
"to quench the fumes of war, seek the aid of those not men"

MORDRED---"Lover in Disguise"
"else evil triumphant will ascend and rule forevermore
and if you should fall, remember, you almost had it all"

TAI---"Dreamer of Fortune"
"else you will fail to find the jaded soul
and if you should fall... remember, you almost had it all"

MARIUS---"Priest of Destiny’s Lost"
"where fell the final blow; life once more will spring.
and if you should fall, remember you almost had it all"

DERRICK---"The Dwarf In The Darkness"
"as still winter grips its icy hand, then come hunting that ancient lore"

THESE LINES MIGHT GO TOGETHER BECAUSE OF THE WAY THEY FIT INTO AN ABBA RHYME SCHEME, BUT THEY DON’T FIT PERFECTLY (A FEW OF THE LINES DON'T FIT INTO THE RHYME SCHEME AT ALL):
"When silver bells sing
while blue bells grow
where fell the final blow;
life once more will spring."

"as still winter grips its icy hand,
then come hunting that ancient lore
death's wind shall blow once more
when spring comes upon the land"

"to quench the fumes of war,
seek the aid of those not men
else evil triumphant will ascend
and rule forevermore"

(THESE ARE THE LINES THAT DON'T FIT INTO THE ABBA RHYME SCHEME, SO EITHER WE‘RE STILL MISSING PART OF THE PROPHESY---ENTIRELY POSSIBLE---OR I‘M MISSING SOMETHING, WHICH IS ALSO LIKELY, OR THEY ARE DESIGNED NOT TO RHYME, OR THEY GO AT THE END OF EACH STANZA AND AREN'T SUPPOSED TO RHYME)
"and if you should fall, remember you almost had it all"
"and then the unity will break"
"else you will fail to find the jaded soul"
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Bits of Prophesy · 05-20-06 2:13pm
by Andante
Re: Bits of Prophesy · 05-20-06 6:56pm
by Kai Magpies
Re: Bits of Prophesy · 05-21-06 3:55am
by KC under the midnight sun

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