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Rated: 13+ · Message Forum · How-To/Advice · #1246722
I'm a stickler for characters. I'll review your fiction. That's all.
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Apr 15, 2007 at 8:42pm
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I try the best I can with my characters, but I'd like to hear what you think. Only got the first chapter written so far, so there're lots of unexplained stuff, but working on the second chapter now (if time/classes/work allow... *crosses fingers*).

 Chapter 1 - Brought to Bay  (18+)
"I don't believe in -redemption-, Lady..."
#1247096 by silverfeathers


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Silverfeathers
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Review Request · 04-15-07 8:42pm
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