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Rated: E · Message Forum · Writing.Com · #1171455
Reviews/Critiques/Editing for fiction--esp. Romance/Love. All ratings & lengths accepted.
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Apr 16, 2007 at 1:40pm
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 White Houses  (E)
It is only in the future that we can again renew the good memories of the past.
#1247043 by Jordan Langer


Criticism of all kinds is welcome. My writing style is a bit unique, and that is the only thing that I request that you not be critical of. Is the theme well presented (description under the title describes well my aim)? Do you like the use of repetition? Are the descriptions interesting or tedious? I tried to make the relationship between the man and woman somewhat curious and mysterious; is it too Victorian?

Thanks for your time.
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For Review · 04-16-07 1:40pm
by Jordan Langer

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