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Jun 7, 2007 at 9:30pm
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Need criticism
by Bard
I'm new here and would love some feedback on what I've written. If you're not into sword and sorcery, it may not appeal to you, even though it doesn't contain that many fantastic elements as of now. I'll be sending you the GPs.

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The Culmination of a Conspiracy and the Death of a Young Warrior
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Thanks.
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Need criticism · 06-07-07 9:30pm
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