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Rated: E · Message Forum · Writing.Com · #1171455
Reviews/Critiques/Editing for fiction--esp. Romance/Love. All ratings & lengths accepted.
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Jul 13, 2007 at 1:24pm
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This is my second completed short story. I'm sure there's some grammar that needs attention in there, along with everything else you review. Thanks!
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Please Review! · 07-13-07 1:24pm
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