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Jun 11, 2008 at 12:37am
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I really need a review
by Isylia
I've just wrote this poem recently and I know it needs work, but I would love your review

 Drowning in despair  (E)
A time when life seemed so overwhelming I began to sink under
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I really need a review · 06-11-08 12:37am
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