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Rated: ASR · Message Forum · Contest · #1328791
A monthly poetry contest about love and heartache.
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Nov 13, 2008 at 12:37am
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my entry
My love is see you dance so well
In this darkness black as hell
Hell is heaven when you are near
For I have nothing left to fear
You beauty goes beyond your grace
Body, form, or even face
Your eyes are like the oceans deep
To look within them makes me weep
You dressed in black like shadows own
And read a text of tales unknown
What was it of you, my dearest love
That made me docile as a dove
Your image burned into my mind
But how I felt was best of kind
I kept on finding tricks and lies
To embrace you once more with my eyes
Minutes had I with you there
But nothing ever could compare
To the moment I had with you
The moment I cannot adieu
Even after years we part
You still and always own my heart
Since I have felt your memory
When life has with without mercy
I see you in the eye of thought
And I feel what you have brought
Then nothing ever made me sad
If nothing else your thought I had
So anywhere I think of you
Becomes a heaven like god did sew
Long to know your name and all
In summer, spring, winter, and fall
Many loves I’ve had a few since then
But none of them your throne were in
You own me true my soul and all
I’m at your words, just simply call
No matter what it is you need
I shall fill your wanted deed
Know forever one last fact
My love for you is still intact
Time cannot remove your gift
No matter how the sands do shift
Though the world may never let us meet in time
My love Sophia know that this is your ryme
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my entry · 11-13-08 12:37am
by david black

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