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Mar 4, 2009 at 12:24am
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a review request for this allegorical poem of mine
by Clemens
Cold, bluish, and the early sun
Smoky trees, whitened skies, and the murky vision,
A parable misted in the morning mist,
A paradox twisted in the dawning rust,
Something beneath, something not, but entwined me.


Cool breeze, grayish, and the lost warmth,
Shivering leaves, damp and moist, and the wet path,
A gait eerily guided by light, though scene blurs,
A wait wearily misted by love, though it pains,
Something beneath, something not, but the entwined me.
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a review request for this allegorical poem of mine · 03-04-09 12:24am
by Clemens

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