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Mar 15, 2009 at 3:51pm
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Review of Texas Weather :)
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This is a new poem I've written. I would like some feedback on it, esp. the ending. I'm struggling over it. Thanks!
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Review of Texas Weather :) · 03-15-09 3:51pm
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