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Sep 10, 2010 at 5:31pm
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Resubmittal of Stones of Red
This poem won the poetry contest for the honoring our vets contest. Althought I still feel a little uneasy with some of it. It is basically a prose poem. No rhyme scheme or syllable count. I am considering rerwriting some of it to at least give it a rythym. I have had only great compliments about it. I am afraid because of the storyline in it I may not be getting what I am looking for out of the reviews.

Thanks again,

McAlhany






 Stones of Red  (E)
A father making peace with his son who was a soldier and is buried in arlington.
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Resubmittal of Stones of Red · 09-10-10 5:31pm
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