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Sep 14, 2010 at 9:13pm
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Kindly, a review request
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Well, this free verse poem is basically about the regrets of a forgotten man viewing his funeral beyond the grave, where his only legacy is the fotune he left behind to be consumed by the greedy. He regrets his loneliness now, wishing he had focused more on family. I don't know if that makes sense entirely... I feel that the poem is too nonsensical because I'm getting some slightly bemused reviews. But I just don't know where to edit because unfortunately it makes sense to me! *Laugh*

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Kindly, a review request · 09-14-10 9:13pm
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