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Sep 16, 2010 at 11:40pm
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One of my stories...
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Not particularly disturbing, to me atleast, but whether it's too long, or the pattern's too erratic, or contains deviationist dialogue, can't seem to get reviews for it... Please check it out. Thanks.
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One of my stories... · 09-16-10 11:40pm
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