I'm trying to recapture a legacy, a gift of writing...what can't be said with your lips, but can through, poems, rhymes and rhythms; to help others see through my spiritual eyes and heart.
I'd love to perfect my gift to achieve this endeavor, I am a vessel for God and I truly want to be a blessing.
Can you review this poem for me and offer any suggestions, tips, etc?
Thanks in Advance
4UWisdom
HE IS HERE (E) The root of it all started with the child’s mental abuse and the spiritual demon #1761415 by Spirit4higher_Insight
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