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May 13, 2011 at 7:58pm
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by oscines
I would love to know what you think of this poem, whether you think the metaphor is appropriate, and whether the build-up of the idea works well...

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An allegorical poem written for the prompt : "Imagine you are being followed".
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Thanks so much!
Tanya
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Review Request · 05-13-11 7:58pm
by oscines

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