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Hear WDC poets read their poems aloud
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Mar 13, 2016 at 5:04pm
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Redo on the first one
Okay, I re-recorded the first poem after the nice comments that it wasn't so bad. Still, I felt it needed more emotion in the reading, so here is version 2.

YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3_BqHBIDR3o

Same poem: "Invalid Entry" 


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Redo on the first one · 03-13-16 5:04pm
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