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Feb 21, 2017 at 12:32am
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Re: Edited Version for Mom?
by Past Member 'northernwrites'
Lying generally comes back to bite the liar.

But perhaps it would be good to look at the other end of the problem?

. . . If you can/could edit the story to make a special version for Mom where it isn't obvious that something was removed, then the removed material isn't important to the story and doesn't belong there in the first place.






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Edited Version for Mom? · 02-20-17 10:15pm
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*Star* Re: Edited Version for Mom? · 02-21-17 12:32am
by Past Member 'northernwrites'
Re: Re: Edited Version for Mom? · 02-21-17 9:36am
by KenF
Re: Edited Version for Mom? · 02-21-17 2:36pm
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Re: Re: Edited Version for Mom? · 02-23-17 6:53pm
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