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Apr 6, 2017 at 9:50am
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April Prompt Three: Gender
by A Non-Existent User
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word count: 356
This was an actual first "stab" at the fight scene in my story. In the story, the action moves forward instead of being summarized (rather awkwardly) in the last sentence.
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April Prompt Three: Gender · 04-06-17 9:50am
by A Non-Existent User

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