I see it's been a while since I gave that last goal! So long in fact that I can say that my writing coach has read through and fed back on both Book 1 and Book 2!
Both really positive and strong constructive feedback that has left me enthusiastic and seeing the story with more focused and clear eyes. Not a huge amount of work to do on Book 1, more around making 'reasons' extra clear for how some of the characters act. Book 2 is a bit of a shambles, but it always had been. It's really only recently become Book 2, so has a lot of extra things it now needs (and a LOT of chaff to cut).
Anyway, my current goal is to work in the changes for Book 1 so that it becomes a completed draft. Second goal is to not let all the work on Book 2 to distract me from the first goal!!!
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