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Thanks for the advice! I have a few more questions if that's okay with you:

         1. I actually don't even know how internal dialogues work! Have you read a good book where it uses it a lot and effectively?

         2. I think I'm gonna use past tense too, for narration, but my trouble here is that I don't know if the time, let's just say, of the story is character telling events as they happen or they all already happened and she's just recounting them, kinda like The Catcher in the Rye I guess. In that case, I don't know how to present her thoughts. I guess I should just think more about them this is a lot, I know.

Anyway, thanks for your answer