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May 18, 2018 at 9:03pm
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High Roller (18+)
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I am really looking for a review of this item. https://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/2158246-High-Roller

I have an synopsis page so you can decide if you want to continue. My primary concerns to the reviewer are logic of story, plot of the story, and are the characters believable. Do you feel my characters troubles? Do you get a feel of where this is? How about my other characters - can you relate to what they are like??

I appreciate all reviews and I really, thank you for your time.
Bob
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High Roller (18+) · 05-18-18 9:03pm
by A Non-Existent User

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