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May 21, 2018 at 11:12am
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Edited: May 21, 2018 at 11:19am
Poor Dead Michael. Graphic violence.
*Dollar* 1,000 GPs were sent to Elisa the Bunny Stik with this post.
Michael, with all his swastikas, was a pretty, manly, hunk. Too bad, I had to kill him.
A story of death, threats, revenge and extortion in a very small town, in the POV of a teenager. I would appreciate a critique or at least a rating.

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Poor Dead Michael. Graphic violence. · 05-21-18 11:12am
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